yar         2006-08-11 14:03:27 UTC

  FreeBSD src repository

  Modified files:        (Branch: RELENG_6)
    share/man/man4       acpi.4 
  Log:
  MFC r1.59:
  
    Fix things I misadvised to Nate Lawson:
  
    - "Ns No" is redundant, so reduce it to just "Ns";
    - use Li to mark up CPU and system power states because here they are
      just strings to be typed literally (add more such mark-up as well);
    - the best practice of typesetting tells us to use an en-dash to
      indicate a closed range; fortunately, groff_char(7) provides such a 
symbol.
  
    In addition, consistently use a comma between independent clauses
    coordinated by a conjunction.
  
  Revision  Changes    Path
  1.52.2.5  +44 -28    src/share/man/man4/acpi.4
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