User: jpmcc   
Date: 2008-02-09 11:09:07+0000
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     <h2>The Location</h2>
 
-    <p>Every year, a completely new team takes over the OOoCon, brings it to
-    their country, and puts their own flavour on it. They have a great deal
-    of freedom in how they run OOoCon, but they can always call on the
+    <p>Every year, a completely new team adopts OOoCon, brings it to their
+    country, and puts their own flavour on it. They have a great deal of
+    freedom in how they run OOoCon, but they can always call on the
     experience of past organizers and the central Marketing Project. The
     result is a conference which has a lot of fresh energy every year,
     guarantees suprises, but which is also reliably interesting. Many
@@ -69,11 +69,11 @@
 
     <h2>The Choices</h2>
 
-    <p>OOoCon is <em>your</em> conference, so it's only right that the choice
-    of where it is held lies with the Community members. <em>If you were a
-    registered Community member on 1st January 2008, you are entitled to
-    vote</em> for the location where you would prefer to attend Conference.
-    If you know you won't be able to attend, <strong>please don't
+    <p>OOoCon is the Community's conference, so it's only right that the
+    choice of where it is held lies with the Community members. <em>If you
+    were a registered Community member on 1st January 2008, you are entitled
+    to vote</em> for the location where you would prefer to attend
+    Conference. If you know you won't be able to attend, <strong>please don't
     vote</strong> - we want OOoCon to be held where the maximum number of
     people can attend.</p>
 
@@ -96,7 +96,7 @@
     <h2>The Timetable</h2>
 
     <p>Voting closes at midnight UTC on February 29th., and the winner will
-    be announces shortly afterwards once all the votes have been
+    be announced shortly afterwards once all the votes have been
     verified.</p>
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