User: jpmcc   
Date: 2008-04-13 18:35:14+0000
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   marketing/www/ooocon2008/cfp/indox.html

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--- indox.html  2008-04-13 16:46:37+0000        1.4
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@@ -133,13 +133,14 @@
 
       <li>QA, UI, and development processes</li>
 
-      <li>UNO and what it can do</li>
+      <li>Packaging for distribution</li>
 
       <li>Porting and platform specifics</li>
 
-      <li>Macros and Extensions</li>
+      <li>System integration with OpenOffice.org (ODF, UNO, API,
+      extensions)</li>
 
-      <li>Packaging for distribution</li>
+      <li>Macros and Extensions</li>
     </ul>
 
     <h4>OpenDocument Format</h4>
@@ -181,7 +182,7 @@
     <h4>Case Studies</h4>
 
     <ul>
-      <li>OpenOffice.org in Governmentand Public Administrations</li>
+      <li>OpenOffice.org in Government and Public Administrations</li>
 
       <li>OpenOffice.org in the private sector (SME - Small to Medium-sized
       Enterprise)</li>
@@ -189,9 +190,6 @@
       <li>Building a successful business around OpenOffice.org (training,
       migration, support, development of extensions, technical
       authors...)</li>
-
-      <li>System integration with OpenOffice.org (ODF, UNO, API,
-      extensions)</li>
     </ul>
 
     <h2>How to submit a Proposal</h2>
@@ -227,14 +225,14 @@
     <h3>Travel Bursaries</h3><a id="bursary" name="bursary"></a>
 
     <p>As this is the first time OOoCon has been held outside Europe, we are
-    will be offering bursaries to help defray the costs of attending. A
-    bursary will consist of free room-only accomodation in a conference
-    hotel, plus a lump sum contribution of Euro 500 towards travel
+    will be offering bursaries to speakers to help defray the costs of
+    attending. A bursary will consist of free room-only accomodation in a
+    conference hotel, plus a lump sum contribution of Euro 500 towards travel
     expenses.</p>
 
     <p>Each request will be considered on the basis of both merit and need,
-    so if you are requesting a bursary, please give as much information as
-    possible to help us evaluate your request.</p>
+    so if you need a busary to enable you to present your paper, please give
+    as much information as possible to help us evaluate your request.</p>
 
     <h3>Presentation Materials</h3>
 




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