Hi Tony,

I have a few quick comments on draft-ietf-dane-smtp-00.

In Section 1:

  "This memo does not cover message submission [RFC4409] [RFC5068]
   [RFC6186], nor does it cover LMTP [RFC2033], since they use the DNS
   in a different way than MTA-to-MTA SMTP."

The reference to RFC 4409 should be updated to RFC 6409.

In Section 1.1:

  "Is the Transmitted: header useful enough to include in this spec?
   Should it be dropped, or perhaps moved to another document?"

I suggest sticking to a SMTP versus Message Format split and dropping the Transmitted: header field.

In Section 2:

   "ADMD:  An ADministrative Management Domain, as described in the
    Internet Mail Architecture [RFC5598]."

The reference to RFC 5598 should be normative.

In Section 3.1:

  "o  A CNAME or DNAME pointing to a successful result."

RFC 5321 does not say anything about DNAME.

In Section 3.2:

  "It then proceeds with TLS negotiation [RFC5246].  If the
   client uses the Server Name Indication TLS extension ([RFC6066]
   section 3) it MUST use the SMTP server host name as the value for the
   ServerName field."

I am not sure whether to hand-wave by not getting in RFC 6125 details (see Section 7.4 too).

In Section 8:

  "If any of the DNS queries are for an internationalized domain name,
   then they need to use the A-label form [RFC5890]."

I suggest using RFC 6531 as any future clarification for internationalized email (SMTP) would go in there.

BTW, why go into intra-domain SMTP? The proposal could take a SMTP client to SMTP server approach and anything not using Section 5 of RFC 5321 is left unspecified (what Section 3.1 refers to as "insecure delivery").

Regards,
-sm

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