Here is my proof read of Chapter 1 after Ammon's edits were included..
Hopefully, I've identified additional areas that needed smoothing :)
See
https://docs.google.com/folder/d/0Bx4LKjIszYzdX1BtLWZDaTltVlU/edit?usp=sharing
or http://goo.gl/AvOyy if that link is too long.
Mark Garrow
Scunizi
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