Gorry -
Sally Floyd wrote:
Gorry and Arjuna -
This looks fine to me.
One sentence needs to be corrected:
Section 2.4 says the following:
"Reception of a Quick-Start Response packet results in the sender
entering the Quick-Start Mode."
I think this needs to be rephrased. Later text gives conditions
when the reception of a Quick-Start Response packet doesn't result
in the sender entering the Quick-Start Mode. E.g., when "the
approved Quick-Start rate is less than current sending rate".
I suggest:
Reception of a Quick-Start Response packet that approves a rate
higher than the current rate results in the sender entering the
Quick-Start Mode.
Sounds good to me.
- Sally
http://www.icir.org/floyd/
