On Wed, May 01, 2013 at 09:17:03AM -0500, Gunnar Wolf wrote: > > "DebConf13 thanks it's two platinum sponsors: Google > > (http://www.google.com/) and the Matanel Foundation > > (http://www.matanel.org).
> I think the short version is better. And, as others suggested, I'd add > "as well as our other sponsors > (http://debconf13.debconf.org/sponsors.xhtml)" Agreed: Grammarfied: DebConf13 thanks its two platinum sponsors, Google (http://www.google.com/) and the Matanel Foundation (http://www.matanel.org), as well all other sponsors (http://debconf13.debconf.org/sponsors.xhtml). Could we also add a "fluff" sentence to that? Such as, "Your generous support is very appreciated." ? -- ---------------------------------------------------------- Patty Langasek [email protected] ---------------------------------------------------------- At times, you may end up far away from home; you may not be sure of where you belong, anymore. But home is always there... because home is not a place. It's wherever your passion takes you. --- J. Michael Straczynski _______________________________________________ Debconf-team mailing list [email protected] http://lists.debconf.org/mailman/listinfo/debconf-team
