On Mon, Mar 14, 2011 at 02:16:58PM +0100, Holger Levsen wrote: > Hi Tássia, > > On Sonntag, 13. März 2011, Tássia Camões wrote: > > I'm helping Tiago with this. We have considered Holger's suggestions > > and I have rephrased most of the text content, so please review it one > > more time :) > > thank you to for your work on this, IMHO the text is much more readable now! > > Just some tiny remarks... (and please mind I'm not an English native speaker > neither ;) > > > DebConf is one of the most fruitful moments of Debian development > > throughout the year. Even though most part of code is not necessarily > > written during those days, many team meetings take place and it is a great > > opportunity for people to share ideas and plan out what to do when the > > s/out//
No, that would be grammatically incorrect. You can't use 'through' in that context (or am I missing a second 'out'?) [...] > > Countless ideas have been proposed during Debconf talks and BOFs, discussed > > by the audience (at the venue and remote) and worked on afterwards. As an > > example, Joey Hess' Constantly Usable Testing proposal would have a minor > > impact if it was not properly introduced for other developers. Furthermore, > > s/would have a minor impact/would probably have less impact/ - not sure about > adding "probably" in that sentence, but it should definitly be "less impact", > not "minor impact". I agree with the 'probably'; this is an assumption that we can't be sure about (because, well, it did happen that way and not the other). [...] > > The video setup is mostly made of software components instead of expensive > > proprietary hardware. Not surprisingly, all pieces are free software, hence > > "proprietary video hardware"?!? I think it's a good idea to contrast the non-freeness of any hardware mixer you'll find out there against the fact that the software is free... [...] > > one can easily make use of the video team experience without major > > expenses. > > > > Typically, there are cameras pointing to the speaker and audience, > > microphones to get audio from the speaker, audience and ambiance, as well > > as a slide capturing > > device. The video is grabbed via firewire and transfered to the transferred -- The biometric identification system at the gates of the CIA headquarters works because there's a guard with a large gun making sure no one is trying to fool the system. http://www.schneier.com/blog/archives/2009/01/biometrics.html _______________________________________________ Debconf-video mailing list [email protected] http://lists.debconf.org/mailman/listinfo/debconf-video
