Hello,
Alexander Reichle-Schmehl <[email protected]> wrote:
> -<p>You can download a couple of image files the size of a floppy disk
> -or another removable media of similar small size, write them to the media,
> +<p>You can download a couple of image files the size of a
> +removable media of similar small size, write them to the media,
> and then start the installation by booting from that.</p>
That sentence seems to be hard to understand for me (both the old and
the new version).
I am not a native english speaker, but I could not find out, what
that should mean.
And: the "similar" has lost its reference: It was" floppys and similar
media", now it is "similar media". Similar to what?
I would propose:
You can download a couple of image files that should fit on removable
media of small size, write them to ...
Greetings
Holger
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