Philip Hands wrote:
>> Template: grub-installer/no-nvram
>> Type: boolean
>> Default: false
>> # :sl4:
>> _Description: Avoid adding GRUB to Firmmware NVRAM configuration?
^^^^^
Hang on, typo (and why capitalised?)
>> By default GRUB will be registered into NVRAM on platforms where this is
>> required. e.g. UEFI Boot Manager or OpenFirmware boot device.
^
Stop followed by lowercase "e.g."? I'd suggest expanding the Latin
abbreviation to "such as" here and "for instance" below.
Then taking your revisions:
> Ocasionally this is not desired (e.g. on systems that PXE boot and then
^
Typo: "occasionally".
"PXE boot" as a verb might want a hyphen, but then again maybe not.
> chainload). Answering "yes" here will leave NVRAM untouched.
Or "setting this option", or maybe "accepting", though that might be
confusing with "Default: false" and "yes" meaning "avoid doing it"...
I'll leave it for now. So:
_Description: Avoid adding GRUB to firmware NVRAM configuration?
By default GRUB will be registered into NVRAM on platforms where this is
required, such as UEFI Boot Manager or OpenFirmware boot devices.
.
Occasionally this is not desired (for instance on systems that PXE boot
and then chainload). Answering "yes" here will leave NVRAM untouched.
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