Hi Samuel, I would like to recommend some proofreading for your latest installation-guide commit.
I have added some formatting tags (like <keycap>&enterkey;</keycap>) for the keystrokes and some other minor things (like avoiding the three-times use of "just" in one sentence). A diff is attached. I can also push it, if you want. Regards + Merry Christmas to you and your family! Holger -- Holger Wansing <[email protected]> PGP-Fingerprint: 496A C6E8 1442 4B34 8508 3529 59F1 87CA 156E B076
diff --git a/en/boot-installer/accessibility.xml b/en/boot-installer/accessibility.xml index 6a305e95e..eab89cdd0 100644 --- a/en/boot-installer/accessibility.xml +++ b/en/boot-installer/accessibility.xml @@ -35,20 +35,22 @@ boxes. The choice can be made at the boot prompt, see the documentation for </para><para> With the <userinput>newt</userinput> front-end (used mostly with braille), one -mostly just selects answers with arrow keys, and one presses &enterkey; to -validate the choice. Pressing &tabkey; and &shiftkey; - &tabkey; allows to -switch between dialog elements, and notably to access the -<userinput>Go Back</userinput> button with brings back again to previous +mostly just selects answers with arrow keys and presses <keycap>&enterkey;</keycap> +to validate the choice. Pressing <keycap>&tabkey;</keycap> or +<keycombo><keycap>&shiftkey;</keycap> <keycap>&tabkey;</keycap></keycombo> +allows to switch between dialog elements, and notably to access the +<userinput>Go Back</userinput> button, which brings back again to previous questions. Some dialogs contain check boxes, which can be ticked on and off by -pressing &spacekey;. +pressing <keycap>&spacekey;</keycap>. </para><para> With the <userinput>text</userinput> front-end (used mostly with speech), one -mostly selects answers by typing their number followed by pressing &enterkey;. -One can also just not type anything and just press -&enterkey; to just accept the default value. Typing <userinput><</userinput> -and pressing &enterkey; brings back again to previous questions. When a +mostly selects answers by typing their number followed by pressing +<keycap>&enterkey;</keycap>. One can also not type anything and just press +<keycap>&enterkey;</keycap>, to simply accept the default value. Typing +<userinput><</userinput> and pressing <keycap>&enterkey;</keycap> +brings back again to previous questions. When a selection of choices has to be made (e.g. during task selection), one can type <userinput>!</userinput> to express an empty selection.
