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regarding Some improvments in maint-guide (found while translating)
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Package: debian-reference
Version: 2.53
Severity: normal
Hi,
Excuse me ... I was busy then and I ovelooked this. Next time, send
this to BTS so it does not get lost.
May I ask 2 things:
* Update the translation first, please.
(I have comments on some translation text bellow.)
* For english fix, please provide with 2 different fixes so I do not cause
too much work for other translators.
* Factual addition/correction which require translation
* Stylistic change which does not cause translation change.
> -"Since this is a tutorial, I choose to explain each detailed step for some "
> +"Since this is a tutorial, I choose to explain each step in detail for some "
More readable ... probably. But no translation change.
> -"upstream source in a format other than <filename>tar.gz</filename> or "
> -"<filename>tar.bz2</filename>"
> +"upstream source in a format other than <filename>tar.gz</filename>, "
> +"<filename>tar.bz2</filename> or <filename>tar.xz</filename>"
True. Good point.
> "completion feature of the <command>quilt</command> command to the "
> -"<command>dquilt</command> command."
> +"<command>dquilt</command> command:"
Hmmmm... I wrote these in many years and may be lost track of the style
consistency. Unless all fixes are in one patch for the whole document
and complete, I would rather pass this colon fixes to avoid overloading
translatiors.
> -Then let's create <filename>~/.quiltrc-dpkg</filename> as follows.
> +Then let's create <filename>~/.quiltrc-dpkg</filename> as follows:
>
> "<command>dh_auto_configure</command> and <command>dh_auto_install</command>
> "
> -"commands if the following conditions are met."
> +"commands if the following conditions are met:"
>
> -"literal> for libraries, <literal>mail</literal> for email readers and "
> +"literal> for libraries, <literal>mail</literal> for e-mail readers and "
"email" without - is accepted in the US style. Changing one out of
many is also bad.
> -"Line 6 is the version of the <ulink url=\"&debian-policy;\">Debian Policy "
> -"Manual</ulink> standards this package follows, the one you read while
> making "
> +"Line 6 is the version of the <ulink url=\"&debian-policy;\">Debian Policy"
> +"</ulink> standard this package follows, the one you read while making "
>
> -"beginning with the TAB code (ASCII 9) specify the recipe for carrying out "
> -"that target. Empty lines and lines beginning with <literal>#</literal> "
> +"beginning with the TAB code (ASCII 9) after which the recipe for carrying
> out "
> +"that target is specified. Empty lines and lines beginning with
> <literal>#</literal> "
>
> -"systemitem> Manual at the local copy <filename>&doc-base;</filename> "
> +"systemitem> manual at the local copy <filename>&doc-base;</filename> "
OK (Style)
> -msgid "User command"
> +msgid "User commands"
OK (Style)
> -"Debian Menu sub-policy 2.1 \"Preferred menu structure\"</ulink>. There was
> "
> +"Debian Menu sub-policy, 2.1 \"Preferred menu structure\"</ulink>. There
> was "
OK (Style)
> -"manvolnum> </citerefentry>: import previous Debian package to a Git "
> +"manvolnum> </citerefentry>: import a previous Debian package to a Git "
OK (Style)
> -"manvolnum> </citerefentry>: import new upstream tar to a Git repository."
> +"manvolnum> </citerefentry>: import a new upstream tar to a Git repository."
OK (Style)
> -"convert it to the <systemitem role=\"package\">quilt</systemitem> command "
> +"convert it <systemitem role=\"package\">quilt</systemitem> "
Good point. (not critical but ...)
> -"file which includes all changes from the last upload. This can be done by "
> +"file which includes all changes since the last upload. This can be done by
> "
Maybe more clear. (Style)
> "package name.<placeholder type=\"footnote\" id=\"0\"/> You should read the "
> -"following primary references in detail."
> +"following primary references in detail:"
>
> "<systemitem role=\"package\">apt</systemitem>. You should read the "
> -"following references in detail."
> +"following references in detail:"
>
> The following sentence is unclear to me. I did my best to translate it,
> but you should consider rewording it:
> "The actual triplet path is dynamically set into <literal>"
> "$(DEB_HOST_MULTIARCH)</literal> value by <citerefentry> <refentrytitle>dpkg-"
> "architecture</refentrytitle> <manvolnum>1</manvolnum> </citerefentry> for "
> "each build."
>
> "each build. For example, the path to install multiarch libraries are "
> -"changed as follows.<placeholder type=\"footnote\" id=\"0\"/>"
> +"changed as follows:<placeholder type=\"footnote\" id=\"0\"/>"
>
> Sometime you use colons, sometimes you dont:
Again, does your change clean things completely?
> msgid "Package"
> msgstr "Paket"
> #. type: Content of:
> <book><appendix><section><informaltable><tgroup><thead><row><entry>
> msgid "Architecture:"
> msgstr "Architektur:"
>
> #. type: Content of:
> <book><appendix><section><informaltable><tgroup><thead><row><entry>
> msgid "Multi-Arch:"
> msgstr "Multiarch:"
>
> #. type: Content of:
> <book><appendix><section><informaltable><tgroup><thead><row><entry>
> msgid "Package content"
> msgstr "Paketinhalt"
>
> -msgid "Multi-Arch:"
> +msgid "Multiarch:"
These are denbian/control file stanza header text which you do not
translate. This is table. I do not think translating these words makes
it very confissing.
> "<citerefentry> <refentrytitle>dh</refentrytitle> <manvolnum>1</manvolnum>
> </"
> -"citerefentry> as follows."
> +"citerefentry> as follows:"
>
> Finally, sometimes you leave a space before a <footnote ..>, sometimes you
> don't.
Very true. But I will leave them as is. You can chose any style in
your translation.
Thank you.
Regards,
Osamu
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--- Begin Message ---
Source: maint-guide
Source-Version: 1.2.34
We believe that the bug you reported is fixed in the latest version of
maint-guide, which is due to be installed in the Debian FTP archive.
A summary of the changes between this version and the previous one is
attached.
Thank you for reporting the bug, which will now be closed. If you
have further comments please address them to [email protected],
and the maintainer will reopen the bug report if appropriate.
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Osamu Aoki <[email protected]> (supplier of updated maint-guide package)
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Date: Tue, 14 Oct 2014 21:29:11 +0900
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Architecture: source all
Version: 1.2.34
Distribution: unstable
Urgency: medium
Maintainer: Osamu Aoki <[email protected]>
Changed-By: Osamu Aoki <[email protected]>
Description:
maint-guide - Debian New Maintainers' Guide
maint-guide-ca - Debian New Maintainers' Guide (Catalan)
maint-guide-de - Debian New Maintainers' Guide (German)
maint-guide-es - Debian New Maintainers' Guide (Spanish)
maint-guide-fr - Debian New Maintainers' Guide (French)
maint-guide-it - Debian New Maintainers' Guide (Italian)
maint-guide-ja - Debian New Maintainers' Guide (Japanese)
maint-guide-ru - Debian New Maintainers' Guide (Russian)
Closes: 700310 753319 755872 761611
Changes:
maint-guide (1.2.34) unstable; urgency=medium
.
* Mention wnpp-alert. Closes: #700310
* Style fix by Helge Kreutzmann. Closes: #753319
* Update translation: fr, jp. Closes: #755872
* Update CSS matching other Debian pages. Thanks, Stéphane
Blondon. Closes: #761611
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