Package: libpam-modules
Version: 1:1.3-7
Severity: minor

The page pam_rhosts(8) is in need of some typesetter's
corrections and I propose the the following patch to the
relevant Docbook source.

Best regards,
  Mats Erik Andersson, DM
--- pam-1.1.3/modules/pam_rhosts/pam_rhosts.8.xml.orig	2008-08-18 15:29:25.000000000 +0200
+++ pam-1.1.3/modules/pam_rhosts/pam_rhosts.8.xml	2012-04-22 04:35:10.000000000 +0200
@@ -28,11 +28,11 @@
     <para>
       This module performs the standard network authentication for services,
       as used by traditional implementations of <command>rlogin</command>
-      and <command>rsh</command> etc.
+      and <command>rsh</command> et cetera.
     </para>
     <para>
       The authentication mechanism of this module is based on the contents
-      of two files; <filename>/etc/hosts.equiv</filename> (or
+      of two files: <filename>/etc/hosts.equiv</filename>
       and <filename>~/.rhosts</filename>. Firstly, hosts listed in the
       former file are treated as equivalent to the localhost. Secondly,
       entries in the user's own copy of the latter file is used to map
@@ -44,9 +44,9 @@
     </para>
     <para>
       The module authenticates a remote user (internally specified by the
-      item <parameter>PAM_RUSER</parameter> connecting from the remote
-      host (internally specified by the item <command>PAM_RHOST</command>).
-      Accordingly, for applications to be compatible this authentication
+      item <parameter>PAM_RUSER</parameter>) connecting from the remote
+      host (internally specified by the item <parameter>PAM_RHOST</parameter>).
+      Accordingly, for applications to be compatible with this authentication
       module they must set these items prior to calling
       <function>pam_authenticate()</function>.  The module is not capable
       of independently probing the network connection for such information.

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