Package: entagged Version: 0.35-4 Severity: wishlist Tags: patch The package description for entagged has a couple of typos and stylistic issues. Currently:
> Description: Java Audio File Tagger This capitalisation would make sense if its name was JAFT, but given that it isn't, leave the words "audio file tagger" lowercase. It's unclear why end users would care that it's written in Java; the long description doesn't seem to think it's worth mentioning, so what is it doing here in the synopsis? Demote it and replace it with a mention of the app's main selling point over its rivals: "with freedb support". Another major feature that this description fails to hint at is that entagged is a *graphical* tagger (like easytag), not a commandline tool (like vorbiscomment). > Entagged is a audiofile tagger, using the freedb online database for Typos: s/a audio/an audio/, and s/audiofile/audio file/. > the retrieval of the tags. It supports custom file renaming from tags > (with any directory stucture) and vice versa. Supports: mp3, ogg, Typo: s/stucture/structure/. The "vice versa" is a bit confusing: entagged supports file renaming from tags, and... tag renaming from files? Leave out the "vice versa" and just use roughly the same phrasing as in the man page. > flac, mpc, ape, wma. Since I'm already editing this I'll sort the formats into alphabetical order and (again as in the man page) put them in caps - these are the equivalents of "JPEG", not ".jpg"). So my suggested version is: | Description: graphical audio file tagger with freedb support | Entagged is an audio file tagger written in Java, using the freedb online | database for the retrieval of the tags. It can be used to organize files | into complex directory structures according to their tags, or to tag them | from their filenames. Supports: APE, FLAC, MP3, MPC, OGG, WMA. -- JBR Ankh kak! (Ancient Egyptian blessing)
diff -ru entagged-0.35.pristine/debian/control entagged-0.35/debian/control --- entagged-0.35.pristine/debian/control 2011-09-25 22:18:45.000000000 +0100 +++ entagged-0.35/debian/control 2012-07-07 22:22:55.363392436 +0100 @@ -14,8 +14,8 @@ Architecture: all Depends: ${misc:Depends}, openjdk-6-jre | java6-runtime, libhsqldb-java, squareness -Description: Java Audio File Tagger - Entagged is a audiofile tagger, using the freedb online database for - the retrieval of the tags. It supports custom file renaming from tags - (with any directory stucture) and vice versa. Supports: mp3, ogg, - flac, mpc, ape, wma. +Description: graphical audio file tagger with freedb support + Entagged is an audio file tagger written in Java, using the freedb online + database for the retrieval of the tags. It can be used to organize files + into complex directory structures according to their tags, or to tag them + from their filenames. Supports: APE, FLAC, MP3, MPC, OGG, WMA.