Package: forg
Version: 0.5.1-7
Severity: wishlist
Tags: patch

Perhaps unsurprisingly, the package description for forg is in need of
a small amount of routine maintenance.

> Description: Graphical Gopher Browser

A perfectly good synopsis, except that there's no need to capitalise
every word.  (It would be different if the package was called "ggb";
just what does FORG mean, anyway?  Does anybody know?)

> forg is a new graphical browser for gopher written in python.

This has the opposite problem: the upstream name for this software is
"The FORG", and Gopher and Python are also entitled to some uppercase.

Meanwhile this is a good demonstration of why it's unwise to put the
word "new" in a package description.  The FORG is now fairly old.

> It will let you browse the world-wide gopherspace and handles
> various types of media, including HTML and video.

No major problems here, though I'm getting a bit tired of the word
"browse".  So my suggested text is:

  Description: graphical Gopher browser
   The FORG is a graphical client for Gopher written in Python. It will
   let you browse the world-wide gopherspace and handles various types of
   media, including HTML and video.

(Oh, and I've accidentally trimmed some trailing whitespace.)

-- System Information:
Debian Release: 7.0
  APT prefers testing-updates
  APT policy: (500, 'testing-updates'), (500, 'testing')
Architecture: amd64 (x86_64)

Kernel: Linux 3.2.0-4-amd64 (SMP w/2 CPU cores)
Locale: LANG=en_GB.UTF-8, LC_CTYPE=en_GB.UTF-8 (charmap=UTF-8)
Shell: /bin/sh linked to /bin/dash

Versions of packages forg depends on:
ii  python             2.7.3-4
ii  python-central     0.6.17
ii  python-imaging-tk  1.1.7-4
ii  python-pmw         1.3.2-6
ii  python-tk          2.7.3-1

forg recommends no packages.

forg suggests no packages.

-- no debconf information

-- 
JBR
Ankh kak! (Ancient Egyptian blessing)
diff -ru forg-0.5.1.pristine/debian/control forg-0.5.1/debian/control
--- forg-0.5.1.pristine/debian/control	2013-02-25 10:55:20.000000000 +0000
+++ forg-0.5.1/debian/control	2013-02-25 12:12:47.425205469 +0000
@@ -10,8 +10,7 @@
 Architecture: all
 Depends: ${python:Depends}, python-tk, python-pmw, python-imaging-tk
 XB-Python-Version: ${python:Versions}
-Description: Graphical Gopher Browser
- forg is a new graphical browser for gopher written in python.
- It will let you browse the world-wide gopherspace and handles
- various types of media, including HTML and video.
-
+Description: graphical Gopher browser
+ The FORG is a graphical client for Gopher written in Python. It will
+ let you browse the world-wide gopherspace and handles various types of
+ media, including HTML and video.

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