Dear Debian maintainer,

On Wednesday, April 24, 2013, I sent you a notification about the beginning of 
a review
action on debconf templates for squid-deb-proxy.

Then, I sent you a bug report with rewritten templates and announcing
the beginning of the second phase of this action: call for translation
updates.

Translators have been working hard and here is now the result of their efforts.

Please consider using it EVEN if you committed files to your
development tree as long as they were reported.

The attached tarball contains:

- debian/changelog with the list of changes
- debian/control with rewrites of packages' descriptions
- debian/<templates> with all the rewritten templates file(s)
- debian/po/*.po with all PO files (existing ones and new ones)

As said, please use *at least* the PO files as provided here,
preferrably over those sent by translators in their bug reports. All
of them have been checked and reformatted. In some cases, formatting
errors have been corrected.

The patch.rfr file contains a patch for the templates and control
file(s) alone.

Please note that this patch applies to the templates and control
file(s) of your package as of Wednesday, April 24, 2013. If your package was 
updated
in the meantime, I may have updated my reference copy....but I also
may have missed that. This is indeed why I suggested you do not
modified such files while the review process was running,
remember..:-)

It is now safe to upload a new package version with these changes.

Please notify me of your intents with regards to this. 

There is of course no hurry to update your package but feel free to
contact me in case you would need sponsoring or any other action to
fix this.



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--- squid-deb-proxy.old/debian/squid-deb-proxy.templates        2013-04-20 
08:32:42.653002140 +0200
+++ squid-deb-proxy/debian/squid-deb-proxy.templates    2013-05-12 
11:45:09.749603632 +0200
@@ -1,16 +1,26 @@
+# These templates have been reviewed by the debian-l10n-english
+# team
+#
+# If modifications/additions/rewording are needed, please ask
+# debian-l10n-engl...@lists.debian.org for advice.
+#
+# Even minor modifications require translation updates and such
+# changes should be coordinated with translators and reviewers.
+
 Template: squid-deb-proxy/ppa-enable
 Type: boolean
 Default: false
-_Description: Allow PPA (Personal Package Archive) access?
- Squid-deb-proxy by default will not allow PPA repositories from launchpad.
- Selecting Y in this option will activate PPA repo access.
+_Description: Allow PPA access?
+ By default, squid-deb-proxy does not allow access to Personal Package
+ Archive (PPA) repositories on Launchpad.
+ .
+ Choosing this option will whitelist these repositories.
 
 Template: squid-deb-proxy/acl-disable
 Type: boolean
 Default: false
 _Description: Allow unrestricted network access?
- Squid-deb-proxy restricts access to the cache to private networks
- only by default.
- Selecting Y in this option will allow unrestricted access of all IPs
- to access the cache. Selecting N will only allow private networks
- (10.0.0.0/8, 172.16.0.0/12, 192.168.0.0/16) to access the cache.
+ By default, squid-deb-proxy allows access to the cache from private
+ networks only (10.0.0.0/8, 172.16.0.0/12, 192.168.0.0/16).
+ .
+ Choosing this option will allow other IP addresses to access the cache.
--- squid-deb-proxy.old/debian/control  2013-04-20 08:32:42.653002140 +0200
+++ squid-deb-proxy/debian/control      2013-04-29 19:08:38.862276079 +0200
@@ -17,19 +17,16 @@
          ${misc:Depends},
         squid3
 Recommends: avahi-utils
-Description: Squid proxy configuration optimized for deb packages
- This package contains a squid proxy configuration that is optimized
- for downloading deb packages. It defaults to a different cache 
- directory and port than the regular squid cache.
- .
- The config default to allowing cached access from a local network
- to *.archive.ubuntu.com.
+Description: Squid proxy configuration to optimize package downloads
+ This package contains a Squid proxy configuration to manage a cache of
+ .deb downloads, with optimizations for the types of file present in
+ package repositories, and using a dedicated directory and port.
 
 Package: squid-deb-proxy-client
 Architecture: all
 Depends: ${misc:Depends}, avahi-utils, apt (>= 0.7.25.3ubuntu1), python
-Description: Automatic proxy discovery for apt based on avahi
- This package contains a helper for the apt http method to discover
+Description: automatic proxy discovery for APT based on Avahi
+ This package contains a helper for the APT http method to discover
  proxies that publish their service as _apt_proxy._tcp.
  .
  It was written to be installed on clients that should use 
@@ -41,12 +38,12 @@
 Section: debian-installer
 Architecture: all
 Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}, configured-network,
-Description: Automatic proxy discovery for apt based on avahi (udeb)
- This package contains a helper for the apt http method to discover
+Description: automatic proxy discovery for APT based on Avahi (udeb)
+ This package contains a helper for the APT http method to discover
  proxies that publish their service as _apt_proxy._tcp.
  .
  It was written to be installed on clients that should use 
  squid-deb-proxy automatically, but it will work with any proxy
  that publishes the service as _apt_proxy._tcp.
  .
- This package contains the udeb only
+ This package contains the udeb for use with the Debian Installer.
--- squid-deb-proxy.old/debian/changelog        2013-04-20 08:32:42.649002023 
+0200
+++ squid-deb-proxy/debian/changelog    2013-06-05 06:53:17.560131994 +0200
@@ -1,3 +1,20 @@
+squid-deb-proxy (0.8) UNRELEASED; urgency=low
+
+  * Debconf templates and debian/control reviewed by the debian-l10n-
+    english team as part of the Smith review project. Closes: #705794
+  * [Debconf translation updates]
+  * Russian (Yuri Kozlov).  Closes: #708728
+  * Danish (Joe Hansen).  Closes: #708854
+  * Slovak (Ivan Masár).  Closes: #709109
+  * German (Chris Leick).  Closes: #709630
+  * Italian (Beatrice Torracca).  Closes: #709881
+  * Czech (Michal Simunek).  Closes: #710114
+  * Polish (Michał Kułach).  Closes: #710389
+  * Japanese (victory).  Closes: #710436
+  * French (jipege).  Closes: #711140
+
+ -- Christian Perrier <bubu...@debian.org>  Sat, 20 Apr 2013 14:37:31 +0200
+
 squid-deb-proxy (0.7) unstable; urgency=low
 
   * add a debian default config

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