victory wrote:
>> Template: whatmaps/enable_service_restarts
>> Type: boolean
>> Default: false
>> _Description: Automatically restart services after library security updates?
>> Services need to be restarted to benefit from updates of shared libraries
>> they
>> depend on. Otherwise they remain vulnerable to security bugs fixed in these
>> updates.
>
> how about something like this:
> s/Otherwise/Until restarting, the services will/
Well, I suppose "Otherwise" is a less common word, but "Until
restarting" strikes me as unidiomatic for reasons I can't put my
finger on. You can say "Until being restarted" or "Until restarted",
but I don't much like those either - going via a passive seems
unlikely to simplify things.
Maybe "Until then, they/the services will remain vulnerable..."?
(Or stick to "Otherwise".)
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JBR with qualifications in linguistics, experience as a Debian
sysadmin, and probably no clue about this particular package
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