On 2014-09-13 02:39, Dmitry Smirnov wrote:
On Thu, 11 Sep 2014 20:12:27 Filipus Klutiero wrote:
Thank you. One more issue persists:
Libteam provides mechanism to team multiple NICs (ports) into logical one
(teamdev) at OSI Layer 2 (Data link).
"provides mechanism" is incorrect. "mechanism" is missing a determiner, such
as "a" (the sentence could alternatively read "Libteam allows several NICs
(ports) to be grouped into a single logical NIC [...]").
Thanks, updated as advised:
http://anonscm.debian.org/cgit/collab-maint/libteam.git/commit/?id=ab95564b6214336007431051da104fce0dc66051
Thanks. There is an issue left in "into logicalone (teamdev)||". The noun phrase is missing a determiner.
This could read "into a single logical one", but "logical one" is at best unclear. I'd suggest
"into a single virtual NIC".
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Filipus Klutiero
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