Package: sg3-utils Version: 1.08-2 Severity: normal Tags: patch
'/usr/share/man/man8/sg_read.8.gz' has typos. Patch attached.
Some examples with comments about why some things are in the patch.
Using 'man sg_read | less -N':
12 Read data from a Linux SCSI generic (sg) device, a raw
devices or a
s/a raw devices or a/raw device or/
...no plural needed, and the first article 'a' is enough.
Right: "Take a bike, car, or train."
Usually wrong: "Take a bike, a car, or a train."
88 output of thid command will look like this:
s/thid/this/
106 To time streaming media read or write time see sg_dd is
in the
107 sg3_utils package....
s/see sg_dd is/see sg_dd(8) which is/
...but the bit in #107 about the package isn't even needed since
the user HAS sg3-utils installed or he wouldn't be reading 'man sg_read'.
Trimmed.
Several sentences lacked periods or trailing double spaces. Added.
Hope this helps...
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