Vincent McIntyre wrote: > I'm submitting this patch on the advice of the systemd maintainers. > Could this be applied to the jessie release notes?
It's good, but I've got a couple of English usage nitpicks: > Index: issues.dbk > =================================================================== > --- issues.dbk (revision 10955) > +++ issues.dbk (working copy) > @@ -586,7 +586,22 @@ > bug #784720</ulink> > </para> > </section> > +<section id="systemd-halt-behaviour"> > + <!-- Wheezy to Jessie (#760923) --> > + <title>systemd: behaviour of 'halt' command</title> ^ The rest of the releasenotes is standardised to en_US (with several "behavior"s just on this page). > + <para> > + The <systemitem role="package">sysvinit</systemitem> implementation > + of the <command>halt</command> command powered off the machine as well. > + The <systemitem role="package">systemd-sysv</systemitem> implementation > + of the <command>halt</command> halts the system, but does not power off ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ That's either "of halt" or "of the halt command"; or we could just drop the phrase entirely as unnecessary repetition (as in my patch). > + the machine. To halt the machine and turn it off, > + use the <command>poweroff</command> command. > + </para> > + <para> > + See also <ulink url="&url-bts;760923">Debian bug #760923</ulink> > + </para> > </section> > +</section> -- JBR with qualifications in linguistics, experience as a Debian sysadmin, and probably no clue about this particular package
Index: en/issues.dbk =================================================================== --- en/issues.dbk (revision 10955) +++ en/issues.dbk (working copy) @@ -586,7 +586,21 @@ bug #784720</ulink> </para> </section> +<section id="systemd-halt-behavior"> + <!-- Wheezy to Jessie (#760923) --> + <title>systemd: behavior of 'halt' command</title> + <para> + The <systemitem role="package">sysvinit</systemitem> implementation + of the <command>halt</command> command powered off the machine as well. + The <systemitem role="package">systemd-sysv</systemitem> implementation + halts the system, but does not power off the machine. To halt the + machine and turn it off, use the <command>poweroff</command> command. + </para> + <para> + See also <ulink url="&url-bts;760923">Debian bug #760923</ulink> + </para> </section> +</section> <section id="required-kernel-config-options"> <!-- Wheezy to Jessie -->