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On Mon, 2016-10-10 at 14:09 +0200, Eduard Bloch wrote:
> > Hello Eduard,
> >
> > On Fri, 2016-09-23 at 11:02 +0200, Eduard Bloch wrote:
> > > I would really like if your documentation, including the package
> > > descriptions, would stop using the word "signature".
> > >
> >
> > I'm open to suggestions.
>
> What about "upgrade plan" or simply "plan"?
That doesn't seem to fit very well.
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set generates a signature file with the data required to install on
or update the
disconnected machine.
FILENAME {apt-offline.sig} is the signature file generated on the
machine. This file
will contain all the information necessary for apt.
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How about:
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set generates a file with the necessary system data required to
install on, or update the disconnected machine.
FILENAME {apt-offline.sig} is the file generated on the disconnected
machine. This file will contain all the information necessary for apt-offline.
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Does it sound better than the current one ?
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Ritesh Raj Sarraf | http://people.debian.org/~rrs
Debian - The Universal Operating System
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