Package: steam Severity: minor Tags: patch Hi,
Please find attached a patch that make your templates compliant with the developers-reference (mainly badly formatted prompt). There is also a few rephrasing. Please note that I'm not a native-speaker, so it may not be perfect. > -_Description: What Ports should sTeam run on? > +_Description: Ports configuration type: With "What Ports should sTeam run on?", I expect to have to enter a list of ports, not to select a pre-defined type of configuration. > sTeam provides access through different protocols using their standard > - ports. If you already run a different daemon (http, news, mail, jabber, > - etc) of that service you will run into troubles, if sTeam tries to use > - those standard ports. > + ports. sTeam will run into troubles if a different daemon (http, news, > mail, jabber, > + etc) already uses one of those standard ports. The structure is hard to understand (if something, then do something if something). > - You can choose to either run sTeam on the standard ports, totally > - alternative ports, which prevents problems with other daemons or you can > + You can choose to run sTeam either on the standard ports or on totally > + alternative ports, which prevents problems with other daemons, or you can > configure sTeam manually. Here you have the following structure: You can choose to ((run steam on the standard ports) || (totally alternative ports, which prevents problems with other daemons) || (you can configure sTeam manually)) or : - You can choose to run steam on the standard ports - You can choose to totally alternative ports, ... - You can choose to you can configure sTeam manually I'm rephrasing it to avoid this. > -_Description: sTeam neads a smarthost which delivers the mails. > - sTeam is not capable to deliver eMails all by itself and needs a smarthost > - if outgoing eMails are allowed. > +_Description: Smarthost used to deliver emails: > + sTeam is not capable to deliver emails all by itself and needs a smarthost > + if outgoing emails are allowed. I'm not sure "eMails" is the appropriate way to write it. exim4 is using "mails", "emails" seems to be correct too. > -_Description: The port the NEWS services should run on. > +_Description: Port of the Jabber service: > The chat rooms of sTeam can be accessed using a Jabber client. > . > The service runs on port 5222 by default and you should only change this, > - if you are sure another IRC server is running on this computer. > + if you are sure another Jabber server is running on this computer. I assume you mean Jabber here. Cheers, -- Thomas Huriaux
--- steam.templates.old 2006-02-14 15:38:34.000000000 +0100 +++ steam.templates 2006-02-14 15:32:35.000000000 +0100 @@ -2,20 +2,19 @@ Type: select _Choices: standard, alternative, manual Default: alternative -_Description: What Ports should sTeam run on? +_Description: Ports configuration type: sTeam provides access through different protocols using their standard - ports. If you already run a different daemon (http, news, mail, jabber, - etc) of that service you will run into troubles, if sTeam tries to use - those standard ports. + ports. sTeam will run into troubles if a different daemon (http, news, mail, jabber, + etc) already uses one of those standard ports. . - You can choose to either run sTeam on the standard ports, totally - alternative ports, which prevents problems with other daemons or you can + You can choose to run sTeam either on the standard ports or on totally + alternative ports, which prevents problems with other daemons, or you can configure sTeam manually. Template: steam/mail-port Type: string Default: 30025 -_Description: The port the SMTP service should run on. +_Description: Port of the SMTP service: The SMTP service defaults to 25. It is very likely that you already run another SMTP daemon, which conflicts with sTeam. Please only use port 25 here if you are sure you don't have any other SMTP service running. @@ -23,14 +22,14 @@ Template: steam/mail-smarthost Type: string Default: localhost -_Description: sTeam neads a smarthost which delivers the mails. - sTeam is not capable to deliver eMails all by itself and needs a smarthost - if outgoing eMails are allowed. +_Description: Smarthost used to deliver emails: + sTeam is not capable to deliver emails all by itself and needs a smarthost + if outgoing emails are allowed. Template: steam/nntp-port Type: string Default: 119 -_Description: The port the NEWS services should run on. +_Description: Port of the NEWS service: sTeam offers internal boards for discussion. They can be accessed using a newsreader (eg.: trn, knode, pan, etc). . @@ -40,7 +39,7 @@ Template: steam/pop3-port Type: string Default: 110 -_Description: The port the POP3 services should run on. +_Description: Port of the POP3 service: sTeam offers access to work rooms using POP3. This means users can access work rooms using their email client. . @@ -50,7 +49,7 @@ Template: steam/imap-port Type: string Default: 143 -_Description: The port the IMAP services should run on. +_Description: Port of the IMAP service: sTeam offers access to work rooms using IMAP. This means users can access work rooms using their email client. . @@ -60,7 +59,7 @@ Template: steam/irc-port Type: string Default: 6667 -_Description: The port the IRC services should run on. +_Description: Port the IRC service: The chat rooms of sTeam can be accessed using a IRC client. . The service runs on port 6667 by default and you should only change this, @@ -69,16 +68,16 @@ Template: steam/jabber-port Type: string Default: 5222 -_Description: The port the NEWS services should run on. +_Description: Port of the Jabber service: The chat rooms of sTeam can be accessed using a Jabber client. . The service runs on port 5222 by default and you should only change this, - if you are sure another IRC server is running on this computer. + if you are sure another Jabber server is running on this computer. Template: steam/ftp-port Type: string Default: 21 -_Description: The port the FTP services should run on. +_Description: Port of the FTP service: sTeam offers access to files using FTP (file transfer protocol). A normal FTP client can be used. . @@ -88,7 +87,7 @@ Template: steam/http-port Type: string Default: 80 -_Description: The port the web services should run on. +_Description: Port of the web service: The service may be accessed using a web browser. For this to work you need to install the web package into the server. Please read README.Debian for further information. @@ -99,7 +98,7 @@ Template: steam/https-port Type: string Default: 443 -_Description: The port the secure web services should run on. +_Description: Port of the secure web service: The service may be accessed securely using a web browser. For this to work you need to install the web package into the server. Please read README.Debian for further information.
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