Hello,

I am proposing patch to change "This poivides the <something>.." into "The package 
provides <something>..."
=== modified file 'debian/control'
--- debian/control	2017-08-09 14:46:06 +0000
+++ debian/control	2017-09-14 17:05:44 +0000
@@ -31,7 +31,7 @@
 Replaces: fcitx-data (<< 1:4.2.9.1-1ubuntu2)
 Suggests: apparmor-profiles, apparmor-profiles-extra, apparmor-utils
 Description: user-space parser utility for AppArmor
- This provides the system initialization scripts needed to use the
+ The package provides system initialization scripts needed to use the
  AppArmor Mandatory Access Control system, including the AppArmor Parser
  which is required to convert AppArmor text profiles into machine-readable
  policies that are loaded into the kernel for use with the AppArmor Linux
@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@
 Depends: apparmor (>= 2.6.1-4ubuntu1), libapparmor-perl, python3-apparmor (= ${binary:Version}), ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}, ${perl:Depends}, ${python3:Depends}
 Suggests: vim-addon-manager
 Description: utilities for controlling AppArmor
- This provides the utilities to operate on AppArmor profiles. Profiles
+ The package provides utilities to operate on AppArmor profiles. Profiles
  can be created, updated, enforced, set to complain mode, and disabled
  with tools such as aa-genprof, aa-enforce, aa-complain and aa-disabled.
 
@@ -50,8 +50,8 @@
 Architecture: all
 Depends: apparmor (>= 2.8.96~2535-0ubuntu1~), ${misc:Depends}
 Description: profiles for AppArmor Security policies
- This provides various AppArmor profiles that have not been shipped by
- the packages they provide confinement for. By default, they ship in
+ The package provides various AppArmor profiles that have not been shipped
+ by the packages they provide confinement for. By default, they ship in
  complain mode so that users can test and choose which are desired.
 
 Package: libapparmor-dev
@@ -60,7 +60,7 @@
 Multi-Arch: same
 Depends: libapparmor1 (= ${binary:Version}), ${misc:Depends}
 Description: AppArmor development libraries and header files
- This package provides the development libraries and header files needed to
+ The package provides development libraries and header files needed to
  link against the AppArmor changehat and log parsing functions. Also
  includes the manpages for library functions.
 
@@ -70,7 +70,7 @@
 Multi-Arch: same
 Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}
 Description: changehat AppArmor library
- This package provides the shared library used for making use of the
+ The package provides shared library used for making use of the
  AppArmor profile and changehat functionality, as well as common log
  parsing routines.
 
@@ -79,7 +79,7 @@
 Architecture: any
 Depends: ${perl:Depends}, ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}
 Description: AppArmor library Perl bindings
- This provides the Perl module that contains the language bindings
+ The package provides Perl module that contains the language bindings
  for the AppArmor library, libapparmor, which were autogenerated via
  SWIG.
 
@@ -89,16 +89,16 @@
 Architecture: any
 Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}
 Description: changehat AppArmor library as an Apache module
- This provides the Apache module needed to declare various differing
- confinement policies when running virtual hosts in the webserver
- by using the changehat abilities exposed through libapparmor.
+ The package provides Apache module needed to declare various differing 
+ confinement policies when running virtual hosts in the  webserver by 
+ using the changehat abilities exposed through libapparmor.
 
 Package: libpam-apparmor
 Section: libs
 Architecture: any
 Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}
 Description: changehat AppArmor library as a PAM module
- This provides the PAM module needed to declare various differing
+ The package provides PAM module needed to declare various differing
  confinement policies when starting PAM sessions by using the
  changehat abilities exposed through libapparmor.
 
@@ -106,7 +106,7 @@
 Architecture: all
 Depends: libapparmor-perl, ${perl:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}, libnotify-bin
 Description: AppArmor notification system
- This package provides a utility to display AppArmor denial messages via
+ The package provides a utility to display AppArmor denial messages via
  desktop notifications. The utility can also be used to generate summary
  reports.
 
@@ -116,7 +116,7 @@
 Depends: ${python:Depends}, ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}
 XS-Python-Version: ${python:Versions}
 Description: AppArmor library Python bindings
- This provides the Python module that contains the language bindings
+ The package provides Python module that contains the language bindings
  for the AppArmor library, libapparmor, which were autogenerated via
  SWIG.
 
@@ -126,7 +126,7 @@
 Depends: ${python3:Depends}, ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}
 XS-Python-Version: ${python3:Versions}
 Description: AppArmor library Python3 bindings
- This provides the Python3 module that contains the language bindings
+ The package provides Python3 module that contains the language bindings
  for the AppArmor library, libapparmor, which were autogenerated via
  SWIG.
 
@@ -136,8 +136,8 @@
 Depends: ${python:Depends}, ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}, python-libapparmor (>= ${source:Upstream-Version}), python-pkg-resources
 XS-Python-Version: ${python:Versions}
 Description: AppArmor Python utility library
- This provides the Python modules that implement the higher-level AppArmor
- applications.
+ The package provides Python modules that implement the higher-level
+ AppArmor applications.
 
 Package: python3-apparmor
 Section: python
@@ -145,8 +145,8 @@
 Depends: ${python3:Depends}, ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}, python3-libapparmor (>= ${source:Upstream-Version}), python3-pkg-resources
 XS-Python-Version: ${python3:Versions}
 Description: AppArmor Python3 utility library
- This provides the Python3 modules that implement the higher-level AppArmor
- applications.
+ The package provides Python3 modules that implement the higher-level
+ AppArmor applications.
 
 Package: dh-apparmor
 Section: devel
@@ -155,7 +155,7 @@
 Depends: ${perl:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}
 Suggests: apparmor-easyprof
 Description: AppArmor debhelper routines
- This provides the debhelper tools used to install and migrate AppArmor
+ The package provides debhelper tools used to install and migrate AppArmor
  profiles. This is normally used from package maintainer scripts during
  install and removal.
 
@@ -164,6 +164,6 @@
 Multi-Arch: foreign
 Depends: ${python3:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}, python3-apparmor
 Description: AppArmor easyprof profiling tool
- This provides the aa-easyprof utility which is an easy to use interface for
- AppArmor policy generation. aa-easyprof supports the use of templates and
- policy groups to quickly profile an application.
+ The package provides the aa-easyprof utility which is an easy to use
+ interface for AppArmor policy generation. aa-easyprof supports the use of
+ templates and policy groups to quickly profile an application.

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