On Sat, 8 Sep 2018 20:30:09 +0900
Kentaro Hayashi <[email protected]> wrote:
> Could you review it again, @henrich?
> Description: Commandline utility to control Audio and Music units on
> FireWire(IEEE1394)
"Utilities to control Audio and Music units on FireWire (IEEE1394)"
> This package contains the following CUI tools.
You should repeat package overview at first.
"hinawa-utils are utilities to control Audio and Music units on FireWire
(IEEE1394) and it contains below command line tools."
> * hinawa-bebob-parser
> * Plug structure parser for BeBoB firmware
> * hinawa-config-rom-printer
> * A lexer/parser of configuration ROM on FireWire
It would be better to describe below style
" * hinawa-bebob-parser: Plug structure parser for BeBoB firmware
* hinawa-config-rom-printer: A lexer/parser of configuration ROM on FireWire"
or
* foobar
- blablabla
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Regards,
Hideki Yamane henrich @ debian.org/iijmio-mail.jp
