Hi Justin, On Thu, Apr 15, 2021 at 02:43:39PM +0100, Justin B Rye wrote: > > the Debian Med team proposes the following text for the Bullseye release > > notes: > > > > <title>News from Debian Med Blend</title> > > > > <para>The Debian Med team was involved into the fight against COVID-19 > > I'd recommend > <para> > The Debian Med team has been taking part in the fight against COVID-19
Fixed in Git. > > by packaging software to research the virus on sequence level as well > > as fighting the pandemic with tools that are used in epidemiology. > > Is this > > by packaging software for researching the virus on the sequence level, > and by fighting the pandemic with the tools used in epidemiology. > > or > by packaging software for researching the virus on the sequence level > and for fighting the pandemic with the tools used in epidemiology. The latter - fixed in Git. > > The effort will be continued in the next release cycle with focus on > > machine learning tools that are used in both fields. > > </para><para> > > Besides adding new packages in the field of life sciences and medicine > > more and more existing packages received Continuous Integration support. > > The existing packages aren't adding new packages; we need something like > > Besides the addition of new packages in the field of life sciences and > medicine, > more and more existing packages have gained Continuous Integration > support. Fixed in Git. > > </para><para> > > A range of performance critical applications now benefit from > > <ulink url="https://wiki.debian.org/SIMDEverywhere">SIMD > > Everywhere</ulink>. > > This library allows packages to be available on more hardware platforms > > supported by Debian, notably on arm64, while maintaining the performance > ^ ^ > This sentence gets a bit sprawling. Maybe turn the parenthetical > commas into em-dashes? Or actual parentheses? > > This library allows packages to be available on more hardware platforms > supported by Debian (notably on arm64), while maintaining the > performance Fixed in Git. > > benefit brought by processors supporting vector extensions, such as AVX > > on > > amd64, or NEON on arm64. > > </para><para> > > To install packages maintained by the Debian Med team, install the > > metapackages named med-*, which are at version 3.6.x for Debian > > Bullseye. > ^ Fixed in Git. > > Feel free to visit the > > <ulink url="http://blends.debian.org/med/tasks">Debian Med tasks > > pages</ulink> > ^ Fixed in Git. > > to see the full range of biological and medical software available in > > Debian. > > </para> > > This all looks good to me except that we're lowercasing "bullseye". > > Oh, and httpsify that URL. I'm fine with all your corrections (and updated Git accordingly). Thanks a lot for the review Andreas. -- http://fam-tille.de