Quoting Jeremy Bicha (2022-06-28 20:36:52)
> On Tue, Jun 28, 2022 at 12:09 PM Jonas Smedegaard <jo...@jones.dk> wrote:
> > Quoting Jeremy Bicha (2022-06-28 17:02:29)
> > > Package: session-migration
> > > Description: Tool to migrate in user session settings
> > >  This tool is used to migrate in session user data when a program is 
> > > evolving
> >
> > Nitpicking comment: Short description talks about "in user session"
> > whereas long description talks about "in session user data".
> >
> > Should it perhaps be changed "in session user settings" in short
> > description?
> 
> The long description of this manpage uses "in-session user data":
> https://manpages.ubuntu.com/session-migration
> 
> So how about "Tool to migrate in-session user data"?

Sounds good to me - but I am not a native english speaker, so what
intuitively feels good to me might be off: I am better at noticing
things off than known when things are in balance.


 - Jonas

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