Hello Helge, I modified the debconf template, following your recommendations, thank you!
As a side effet, it invalidates the translation you sent me previously; I am uploading the modified templates, which will close both bug reports. Best regards, Georges. Helge Kreutzmann a écrit : > Source: kwartz-client > Version: 2.1-2 > Severity: normal > > While translating your debconf messages we noticed quite a few issues > within the debconf template, ranging from spelling error over punctuation > problems up to difficult to understand sentences. > > Please ask on debian-l10n-english for a review to fix all issues, as > we are not native speakers. > > We found the following issues: > > Issue: The wording "is safe" is ambigous, maybe just state (as other tools do > as well): "If unsure, keep the default list." > > #. Type: string > #. Description > #: ../kwartz-client.templates:2001 > "Please enter the port number of the proxy service. The default value is " > "usually safe." > > > > Issue 1: Missing final full stop > Issue 2: The previous strings do not use "you" in the 2nd sentence, use > coherent wording, avoding "you" > > #. Type: boolean > #. Description > #: ../kwartz-client.templates:6001 > "When the recommended package unattended-upgrades is installed, APT will run " > "in the background to attempt some automatic upgrades. If unsure, you can " > "safely keep the \"false\" option" > > > > > Issue 1: What is "run some automatic update"? Do you mean "When APT updates > the package database"? > Issue 2: Sometimes, "apt" is used, sometimes "APT"? > Issue 3: unpriviledged → unprivileged > > #. Type: string > #. Description > #: ../kwartz-client.templates:7001 > "When APT will run some automatic update for the package database, a user " > "name is needed to use the proxy service. This user must be unpriviledged. If > " > "apt does not need to make automatic upgrades, you can keep the default empty > " > "value." > > > > Issue: The previous prompt uses an article, this is inconsistent > > #. Type: password > #. Description > #: ../kwartz-client.templates:8001 > "Password to access the web:" > > > Issue: some strong password → a strong password > > #. Type: password > #. Description > #: ../kwartz-client.templates:8001 > "The unpriviledged user which will be used by APT to access the web needs a " > "password. It must be some strong password. If apt does not need to make " > "automatic upgrades, you can keep the default empty value." > > -- > Dr. Helge Kreutzmann deb...@helgefjell.de > Dipl.-Phys. http://www.helgefjell.de/debian.php > 64bit GNU powered gpg signed mail preferred > Help keep free software "libre": http://www.ffii.de/ -- Georges KHAZNADAR et Jocelyne FOURNIER 22 rue des mouettes, 59240 Dunkerque France. Téléphone +33 (0)3 28 29 17 70
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