Package: debhelper
Version: 13.15.3
Severity: minor

Dear Maintainer,
while updating the strings in the debhelper documentation the l10
documentation team noticed a few issues in the text which I report 
in the attached text file. Some issues are related to the presentation
of text in the final documents.  Others are simple typos. A few
sentences are unclear.

Just for reference: The update of the german translation has been
reported in a separate report as
https://bugs.debian.org/cgi-bin/bugreport.cgi?bug=1069112. The remarks
listed below appear in the po template as FIXME, too.

In case the documentation is updated I will be happy to update the
translation accordingly.

Thank you very much for maintaining this huge project,
Christoph Brinkhaus
1. Issue: s/source/B<source>/
Explanation: The fix should correct the appearance to be bold.
Occurance: debhelper.pod:517
Current string:
"Note that debhelper does not provide debhelper-compat for experimental or "
"beta compatibility levels; packages experimenting with those compatibility "
"levels should put the compat level in the B<X-DH-Compat> field of the source "
"stanza of the F<debian/control> file (or, if only for selected commands, the "
"B<DH_COMPAT> environment variable)."

2. Issue: s/source/B<source>/
Explanation: The fix should correct the appearance to be bold.
Occurance: debhelper-compat-upgrade-checklist.pod:271
Current string:
"The F<debian/compat> file is no longer accepted as a source for specifying "
"the debhelper compat level. Put the compat level in the B<X-DH-Compat> field "
"of the source stanza of F<debian/control>."

3. Issue: s/autoconf/B<autoconf>/
Explanation: The fix should correct the appearance to be bold.
Occurance: debhelper-compat-upgrade-checklist.pod:827
Current string:
"Multiarch support. In particular, B<dh_auto_configure> passes multiarch "
"directories to autoconf in --libdir and --libexecdir."

4. Issue: s/autoconf/B<autoconf>/
Explanation: The fix should correct the appearance to be bold.
Occurance: debhelper-compat-upgrade-checklist.pod:844
Current string:
"B<dh_auto_configure> does not include the source package name in --"
"libexecdir when using autoconf."

5. Issue: s/that has/that have/
Explanation: The fix should correct singular/plural
Occurance: debhelper-compat-upgrade-checklist.pod:107
Current string:
"I<< This item only applies to source packages that has exactly one "
"B<Package> stanza in F<debian/control>. >>"

6. Issue: s/This change changes/This change/
Explanation: There should be one word as "change" only.
Occurance: debhelper-compat-upgrade-checklist.pod:198
Current string:
"Note: This change changes will cause false-positives from an unfixed "
"B<lintian>. Please check L<https://bugs.debian.org/1067653> for B<lintian> "
"support for this change."

7. Issue: would no longer installs → no longer installs
Explanation: Make the description more precise.
Occurance: debhelper-compat-upgrade-checklist.pod:504
Current string:
"The B<dh_installdeb> tool would no longer installs the maintainer provided "
"F<conffiles> file as it was deemed unnecessary.  However, the B<remove-on-"
"upgrade> from dpkg/1.20 made the file relevant again and B<dh_installdeb> "
"now installs it again in compat levels 12+."

8. Issue s/can emulate it/can get an emulation of it/ (or emulate it)
Explanation: I am not 100% sure, but it should make the description more 
precise.
Occurance: debhelper-compat-upgrade-checklist.pod:637
Current string:
"The B<perl-makemaker> and B<perl-build> build systems no longer pass B<-I.> "
"to perl.  Packages that still need this behaviour can emulate it by using "
"the B<PERL5LIB> environment variable.  E.g. by adding B<export PERL5LIB=.> "
"in their debian/rules file (or similar)."

9. Issue: First sentence does not make sense to me.
Explanation: If possible please re-phrase to make it clear.
Occurance: dh_strip:78
Current string:
"Debug symbols will be retained, but split into an independent file in F<usr/"
"lib/debug/> in the package build directory. B<--dbg-package> is easier to "
"use than this option, but this option is more flexible."

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