On Sat, 16 May 2026 19:12:28 +0000 Stefan Kropp <[email protected]> wrote:
> Package: wnpp

Im giving some comments on this as a package - im sure you will get
lots of feedback about the "blend"

> * Package name    : debian-marlin

I think it is confusing for users to have the package and blend named
the same thing

I suggest debian-marlin-all or debian-marlin-documentation, depending
on what the package is -- i couldnt tell from the description


>   Version         : 0.1.0
>   Upstream Contact: Stefan Kropp <[email protected]>
> * URL             : https://salsa.debian.org/StefanKropp/debian-marlin/
> * License         : GPL-3

just as example - is this the license of the blend? (clearly not!)

>   Programming Lang: -
>   Description     : Debian Pure Blend for desktop / end-users

the "end user" is business jargon that is confusing for non-it people.
it also adds little, and is technically incorrect  - all users are
"end users", and not every "end user" is a desktop user

if your aim is desktop users you will want to make things a lot clearer!

>
> Goal: Debian Marlin shall be a Debian for end users to run
> Debian on Desktop / Laptops.

laptops?? so i cant use it on my tablet? this seems a bit 1990s?

(also, i dont think this is actually your "goal": this seems more like
an implementaiton detail. your goal is probably more like making
something "easier to use" / "looks good" / "good performance", etc)

>The system shall provide a set of
> pre-installed applications for daily use.

"normal" debian already does this. Is this package a metapackage?

> My idea is to provide a
> set of documentation and tools to get familiarize with Debian
> GNU/Linux.

But this sentence makes it sound like documentation. and missing a d
in "familiarized"

>   "Getting started with Debian GNU/Linux"
>
> Debian Marlin Desktop use Xfce4 as desktop environment

it's confusing to use "desktop" to mean the gui envitonment here, but
hardware above

> and
> includes applications like evolution, libreoffice, a digital
> photo organizer, ebook reader, chat application, audio- and
> video-player, also tools like password manager, backup tool and
> financial-accounting.

"includes" isnt clear (and isnt technically correct unless this is a
huge package): do you mean that installing this package brings in
different/more applications to task-xfce4-desktop?
I also wonder whether your selection of tools is really want "end
users" want installed -- an ebook reader but no web browser?

>
> Under the hood, there should be all important lib / system tools
> provided for daily use (e.g. gvfs-backends, cups-filters,
> avahi,...).

An end user is going to find this quite baffling - we dont consider
any lib[raries?] as "provided for daily use", and are gvfs-backend,
cups-files, avahi really examples of ....anything helpful? - and they
are all in debian already: what is this blend/package doing that
task-xfce-desktop doesnt?

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