* Heretik <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> [2006-08-06 20:40]:
> Ok, please tell me if that would be better :
> 
> Short description : Team based, First Person Shooter game with elements
> of Real Time Strategy

 Too long for a short description. I don't really object to the
abbreviations in the short description as long as they are explained in
the long description. Please see the developer's reference for hints
about how the both parts are displayed and used and the length of the
short description.

 From the policy:
,----------------------------> policy quote <----------------------------
| 3.4.1. The single line synopsis
| -------------------------------
| 
|      The single line synopsis should be kept brief - certainly under 80
|      characters.
`----------------------------> policy quote <----------------------------

> Long description : Tremulous is a free, open source game that blends a
> team based First Person Shooter (FPS) game with elements of a Real Time
> Strategy (RTS) game. Players can choose from 2 unique races, aliens and
> humans. Players on both teams are able to build working structures
> in-game like a Real Time Strategy game. [The end remains unchanged]

 That helps, yes.

* Heretik <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> [2006-08-06 20:48]:
> I changed the severity from important to minor

 Yes, sorry for that part.

* Heretik <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> [2006-08-06 21:51]:
> Or better :
> 
> Short description : Aliens vs Humans, First Person Shooter game with elements
> of Real Time Strategy

 That's even longer. Please see above. Appart from that the change seems
to be nice.

 So long,
Alfie
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    if (argc > 1 && strcmp(argv[1], "-advice") == 0) {
        printf("Don't Panic!\n");
        exit(42);
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