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Section 1.1 'In the beginning'

| Debian is the only distribution that is open for every developer and
| user to contribute their work.

AFAIK that's just not true anymore - Gentoo etc...

Suggested wording: 'was the first'

| It is the only significant distributor of Linux that is not a
| commercial entity.

Of course you can always disccuss the meaning of the word 'significant',
but I'd say that Gentoo is not insignificant.  (And isn't Knoppix
noncommercial, too? That is quite well known by now.)

Again s/only/first/

4.1 The 0.x Releases
| "Since this time, the Debian Project has grown to include several ports
| to other architectures, and a port to a new (non-Linux) kernel, the GNU
| Hurd microkernel. "

And obviously now there's kNetBSD (and kFreeBSD?).

4.2 The 1.x Releases
| ... eventually resulting in today's Debian Rescue Floppy.

Is there such a beast still?  If so, a link would be nice as google
doesn't really give me a hint to find it.

4.6 What's Next?
| Debian is working towards a new installation framework named
| debian-installer, the new Glibc 2.3 and the new GNU GCC 3.2.

gcc-3.3 will be the default compiler in sarge AFAICS.


Addressing most of this:

- --- project-history.sgml.orig 2005-03-16 10:38:46.227574894 +0100
+++ project-history.sgml        2005-03-16 10:41:10.620458978 +0100
@@ -90,9 +90,9 @@
 users.
 
 <p>
- -Debian is the only distribution that is open for every developer and user 
- -to contribute their work.  It is the only significant distributor of Linux
- -that is not a commercial entity.  It is the only large project with a
+Debian was the first distribution open for every developer and user 
+to contribute their work and also the first significant distributor of Linux
+that was not a commercial entity.  It is the only large project with a
 constitution, social contract, and policy documents to organize the project.
 Debian is also the only distribution which is "micro packaged" using detailed
 dependency information regarding inter-package relationships to ensure system
@@ -323,7 +323,8 @@
 <p>
 Since this time,  the Debian Project has grown to include several
 <url id="http://www.debian.org/ports/"; name="ports"> to other architectures,
- -and a port to a new (non-Linux) kernel, the GNU Hurd microkernel.
+and other (non-Linux) kernels like the GNU Hurd microkernel and the BSD
+kernels.
 
 <p>
 An early member of the project, Bill Mitchell, remembers the Linux
@@ -735,7 +736,7 @@
 <p>
 For sarge, Debian is working towards a new installation framework
 named <em>debian-installer</em>, the new Glibc 2.3 and the new GNU GCC
- -3.2.
+3.3.
 
 </sect>
 </chapt>


greetings
- -- vbi

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