Package: svn-buildpackage
Version: 0.6.18
Severity: minor

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The manpage(s) contain a few issues:

* Options are not separated:

  [..] --svn-lintian--svn-linda [..]
  [..] --svn-prebuild--svn-postbuild--svn-pretag--svn-posttag [..]

* The manpage contains two sections called "OPTIONS". But the first
  probably should be "DESCRIPTION".

* The options mentioned in "OPTIONS" (in both sections) probably should
  also be bold to emphasize them: e.g. in

  [..] option may break --svn-lintian, --svn-linda and --svn-move
  functionality [..]

  the options ishould be bold too to emphasize them.

* Further the manpage references in "SEE ALSO" do not follow the manpage
  recommendations, that say, that the referenced refentry should be bold
  (refer to http://www.schweikhardt.net/man_page_howto.html#q3 -> "The SEE
  ALSO section" and http://www.schweikhardt.net/man_page_howto.html#q8 ->
  "Any reference to another man page [..]").

* The "AUTHOR" sections contains an invalid UTF-8 character ( to SGML by
  Gonéri Le Bouder). You should try to use the groff code for this character.

I'm not familar with the docbook-utils package, that seems to be used to
create the manpages. The docbook-xsl stylesheets provide the following
parameters to fix some of these issues:

/usr/share/doc/docbook-xsl-doc-html/doc/manpages/variablelist.term.separator.html
/usr/share/doc/docbook-xsl-doc-html/doc/manpages/variablelist.term.break.after.html
(define handling of option lists realized with the variablelist element)

/usr/share/doc/docbook-xsl-doc-html/doc/manpages/man.charmap.use.subset.html
(set to zero to escape all UTF-8 characters)

The docbook-xsl package contains an example of a manpage written in
DocBook XML, that shows the current power and usage of DocBook to write
manpages.

Regards, Daniel

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Architecture: i386 (i686)

Kernel: Linux 2.6.18.11 (PREEMPT)
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Shell: /bin/sh linked to /bin/bash

Versions of packages svn-buildpackage depends on:
ii  devscripts                  2.10.2       Scripts to make the life of a Debi
ii  file                        4.20-4       Determines file type using "magic"
ii  libsvn-perl                 1.4.2dfsg1-2 Perl bindings for Subversion
ii  perl                        5.8.8-7      Larry Wall's Practical Extraction 
ii  subversion                  1.4.2dfsg1-2 Advanced version control system
ii  unp                         1.0.12       unpack (almost) everything with on
ii  wget                        1.10.2-2     retrieves files from the web

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