Package: dtc-xen
Version: N/A
Severity: normal
Tags: patch

Dear Debian maintainer,

On Friday, April 06, 2007, I notified you of the beginning of a review process
concerning debconf templates for dtc-xen.

The debian-l10n-english contributors have now reviewed these templates,
and the proposed changes are attached to this bug report.

Please review the suggested changes are suggested, and if you have any
objections, let me know in the next 3 days.

Please try to avoid uploading dtc-xen with these changes right now.

The second phase of this process will begin on Saturday, April 21, 2007, when I 
will
coordinate updates to translations of debconf templates.

The existing translators will be notified of the changes: they will
receive an updated PO file for their language.

Simultaneously, a general call for new translations will be sent to
the debian-i18n mailing list.

Both these calls for translations will request updates to be sent as
individual bug reports. That will probably trigger a lot of bug
reports against your package, but these should be easier to deal with.

The call for translation updates and new translations will run until
Thursday, May 03, 2007. Please avoid uploading a package with fixed or changed
debconf templates and/or translation updates in the meantime. Of
course, other changes are safe.

On Friday, May 04, 2007, I will contact you again and will send a final patch
summarizing all the updates (changes to debconf templates,
updates to debconf translations and new debconf translations).

Again, thanks for your attention and cooperation.


-- System Information:
Debian Release: lenny/sid
  APT prefers unstable
  APT policy: (500, 'unstable'), (500, 'stable'), (1, 'experimental')
Architecture: i386 (i686)

Kernel: Linux 2.6.18-4-486
Locale: LANG=C, LC_CTYPE=C (charmap=ANSI_X3.4-1968)
Shell: /bin/sh linked to /bin/dash
--- 
/home/bubulle/travail/debian/rewrite/LCFC/dtc-xen/dtc-xen.old/debian/templates  
    2007-04-03 08:41:17.114729549 +0200
+++ /home/bubulle/travail/debian/rewrite/LCFC/dtc-xen/dtc-xen/debian/templates  
2007-04-18 07:52:00.743324170 +0200
@@ -1,107 +1,129 @@
+# These templates have been reviewed by the debian-l10n-english
+# team
+#
+# If modifications/additions/rewording are needed, please ask
+# for an advice to [EMAIL PROTECTED]
+#
+# Even minor modifications require translation updates and such
+# changes should be coordinated with translators and reviewers.
+
 Template: dtc-xen/conf_soap_port
 Type: string
 Default: 8089
 _Description: Server port:
- What port should it bind to? Default is 8089.
+ Please enter the port the server will bind to.
 
 Template: dtc-xen/conf_soap_login
 Type: string
 Default: dtc-xen
 _Description: SOAP server login:
- dtc-xen will bind a SOAP python server on which a dtc panel can connect to
- in order to start, stop create and destroy a VPS. What login do you want
- to create on that server.
+ Dtc-xen will bind a SOAP Python server (to which a dtc panel can connect, in
+ order to start, stop, create and destroy a VPS).
+ .
+ Please enter the login name to connect to the server.
 
 Template: dtc-xen/conf_soap_pass
 Type: password
 Default: dtc-xen
 _Description: SOAP server pass:
- dtc-xen will generate a password (in a .htpasswd file) that will hold the
- password for the login you have just configured. What password do you want
- to have generated in it?
+ Dtc-xen will generate a .htpasswd file for the login you have just
+ configured.
+ .
+ Please enter the password to use in that file.
 
 Template: dtc-xen/conf_soap_domain_name
 Type: string
 Default: example.com
 _Description: Server hostname:
- What will be the domain name for this dtc-xen server? This will be used as a
+ Please enter the domain name for the dtc-xen server. This will be used as a
  part of the URL by the SOAP dtc panel client.
 
 Template: dtc-xen/conf_node_number
 Type: string
 Default: 0101
 _Description: VPS Server node number:
- dtc-xen will use that number as a VPS Server number and will make your VPS
- numbering using xenXXXXYY with X being the server number (what it's are
- asking you at the moment) and Y being the VPS number itself (xenYY). Note
- that this node number has to be between 4 and 5 chars, and that it will
- create something like nodeXXXX.example.com that will be your server
- hostname (which you can later add in your DTC control panel).
+ Please enter the value to use to set up VPS numbering.
+ .
+ Assuming this value is 'XXXX', the node number will be 'xenXXXXYY',
+ YY being the VPS number itself (xenYY). This node number must be 4
+ or 5 characters long.
+ .
+ As a consequence of this choice, the server's hostname will be
+ nodeXXXX.example.com (which you can later add in your DTC control
+ panel).
 
 Template: dtc-xen/conf_debian_repository
 Type: string
 Default: ftp://ftp.us.debian.org/debian
-_Description: Debian repository for setting-up VPSes:
- dtc-xen will use that repository for creating VPSes, and will copy your
- /etc/apt/sources.list inside your VPS (so this will be used ONLY durring
- the debootstrap stage of the VPS creation).
+_Description: Debian repository for VPS creation:
+ Please enter the repository to use for creating the VPS (Virtual Private
+ Server). The current /etc/apt/sources.list file will be copied the
+ created VPS so the repository you enter here will be used only during
+ the debootstrap stage of the VPS creation.
 
 Template: dtc-xen/conf_netmask
 Type: string
 Default: 255.255.255.0
-_Description: Netmask to be setup in the VPSes:
- Please enter the Netmask to use when doing the VPS network customization
- when dtc-xen creates a VPS.
+_Description: Network mask for the VPS:
+ Please enter the network mask to use in the created Virtual Private
+ Server's network settings.
 
 Template: dtc-xen/conf_network
 Type: string
 Default: 192.168.60.0
-_Description: Network to be setup in the VPSes:
- Please enter the Network address to use when doing the VPS network
- customization when dtc-xen creates a VPS.
+_Description: Network address for the VPS:
+ Please enter the network address to use in the created Virtual Private
+ Server's network settings.
 
 Template: dtc-xen/conf_broadcast
 Type: string
 Default: 192.168.60.255
-_Description: Broadcast to be setup in the VPSes:
- Please enter the network broadcast address to use when doing the VPS
- network customization when dtc-xen creates a VPS.
+_Description: Broadcast address for the VPS:
+ Please enter the network broadcast address to use in the created
+ Virtual Private Server's network settings.
 
 Template: dtc-xen/conf_gateway
 Type: string
 Default: 192.168.60.254
-_Description: Gateway to be setup in the VPSes:
- Please enter the network gateway address to use when doing the VPS network
- customization when dtc-xen creates a VPS.
+_Description: Gateway address for the VPS:
+ Please enter the network gateway address to use in the created
+ Virtual Private Server's network settings.
 
 Template: dtc-xen/conf_linux_kernel_name
 Type: string
 Default: 2.6.16.27-xenU
-_Description: Xen Kernel release name:
- Enter here the kernel version number as it appears in the uname -a. A
- kernel domU with that name must be located in /boot (example:
- vmlinuz-2.6.16.27-xenU) and it's corresponding modules must be in
+_Description: Xen kernel release name:
+ Please enter the kernel version number as it appears with the
+ 'uname -a' command. 
+ .
+ A kernel domU with that name must be located in /boot (example:
+ vmlinuz-2.6.16.27-xenU) and its corresponding modules must be in
  /lib/modules.
 
 Template: dtc-xen/conf_lvm_name
 Type: string
 Default: lvm1
-_Description: Volume group where to create VPS:
- dtc-xen creates physical partitions in a lvm volume group that you have to
- name here. This volume group has to be big enough to hold all the VMs you will
- setup later on this server. If you don't want to use lvm (because you don't
- care if loopback is slower), leave this as default and dtc-xen wont use it
- anyway.
+_Description: Volume group to create VPS in:
+ Dtc-xen creates physical partitions in an existing LVM volume group
+ .
+ Please enter that volume group name. The volume group size must fit
+ all the virtual machiness you will set up later on this server. If
+ you don't want to use LVM (because you don't care if loopback is
+ slower), leave this setting to the default value.
 
 Template: dtc-xen/conf_info_finish_setup
 Type: note
-_Description: How to finish the install
+_Description: Installation completion
  To finish the installation, you need to launch
- /usr/sbin/dtc-xen_finish_install. This script will remove port
- forwarding from your sshd_config and add the grant of xm console
- to the group xenusers so your users can loggin to the physical
- console. It will then try to download the files needed to setup
- Gentoo and CentOS into your VMs. Note that the system is currently
- safe (nobody can connect to a physical console as xenXX, they will
- be rejected because the /etc/sudoers is not changed), but a basic
- user wont be able to log into his physical console using ssh.
+ /usr/sbin/dtc-xen_finish_install. 
+ .
+ This script will remove port forwarding from the current sshd_config
+ file and add the grant of xm console to the group xenusers so that
+ users can login to the physical console. It will then try to
+ download the files needed to setup Gentoo and CentOS into the
+ virtual machines. 
+ .
+ Please note that the system is currently safe (connections to a
+ physical console as xenXX will be rejected because the /etc/sudoers
+ is not changed), but a basic user won't be able to log into his
+ physical console using ssh.
--- 
/home/bubulle/travail/debian/rewrite/LCFC/dtc-xen/dtc-xen.old/debian/control    
    2007-04-03 08:41:17.114729549 +0200
+++ /home/bubulle/travail/debian/rewrite/LCFC/dtc-xen/dtc-xen/debian/control    
2007-04-06 20:59:47.903534751 +0200
@@ -10,11 +10,10 @@
 Priority: optional
 Architecture: all
 Depends: debconf, python, rrdtool, apache | apache2, python-soappy, 
python-crypto, m2crypto, debootstrap, openssl, sudo, rpmstrap, adduser
-Description: A SOAP daemon and help scripts so a control panel can manage Xen 
VMs
- dtc-xen is a SOAP server running over HTTPS with auth,
- so a web GUI tool can manage, create and destroy your
- domU under Xen. This package is to be run in the dom0
- of your Xen server. It's written to integrate within DTC
- web hosting control panel.
+Description: SOAP daemon and scripts to allow control panel management for Xen 
VMs
+ Dtc-xen is a SOAP server running over HTTPS with authentication, so
+ that a web GUI tool can manage, create and destroy domUs under
+ Xen. This package should be used in the dom0 of a Xen server. It
+ integrates itself within the DTC web hosting control panel.
  .
   Homepage: <http://www.gplhost.com/software-dtc-xen.html>

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