tag 428167 pending thanks On Sat, 2007-06-09 at 17:24:45 +0200, Helge Kreutzmann wrote: > Package: dpkg > Version: 1.14.4 > Severity: minor > Tags: patch
> #] > -"Turn certain errors into warnings. Only dpkg-source uses this, but B<dpkg-" > +"Turn certain errors into warnings. Only B<dpkg-source> uses this, but > B<dpkg-" Fixed that one and a bunch of other I found the other day. > #] If no second argument is supplied then ... or the empty string (no > original source, and so no diff) depending on the arguments. > > First, s/depending on the arguments/depending on the first argument/ > and secondly looking for an "empty string" (instead of a file) sound a > little strange. Here it refers to the actions taken if no seconf argument is supplied, which depend on the -sX arguments supplied. I've reworded it accordingly, and removed the second 'empty string' reference which didn't make sense (I assume a copy&paste error). > #] > -"If I<filename> ends in B<.gz> , it is taken to refer to a file compressed " > +"If I<filename> ends in B<.gz>, it is taken to refer to a file compressed " > > I am not sure, if a comma is needed at all. Fixed the space, kept the comma. > #] > -"Specifies that the B<dir> file is, and the installed copy of the new Info " > -"file was, is or will be located in I<infodir>. The default is > B</usr/share/" > +"Specifies that the B<dir> file is or will be, and the installed copy of the > new Info " > +"file was, located in I<infodir>. The default is B</usr/share/" This change changes the semantics of the sentence, I've not touched it for now. > #] > -msgid "Print a similar command to B<-s> but to unset all variables." > +msgid "Print a similar command to B<-s> but unset all variables." > > I'd rather say "and" instead of "but". I'd say the current string is correct. It's stating that it will print commands that will unset the variables once executed. Not that it will unset those variables by itself. And it's but because it's doing something different than -s. > #] Sometimes "command line", sometimes "commandline" > #] One or two spaces after fullstop sometimes I've added those to a man.TODO I've around, I might commit it to the main TODO list eventually. regards, guillem -- To UNSUBSCRIBE, email to [EMAIL PROTECTED] with a subject of "unsubscribe". Trouble? Contact [EMAIL PROTECTED]
