tags 445088 fixed-upstream
thanks

A. Costa wrote:
> Package: manpages
> Version: 2.64-1
> Severity: minor
> Tags: patch
> 
> 
> Found some typos in '/usr/share/man/man7/ip.7.gz', see attached '.diff'.
> 
> Note: grammar typos, I usually avoid these as too "expensive".  If
> any seem questionable, skip 'em.  (Please try to keep the 's/me/be/' fix.)
> 
> Hope this helps...
> 
> -- System Information:
> Debian Release: lenny/sid
>   APT prefers unstable
>   APT policy: (500, 'unstable')
> Architecture: i386 (i686)
> 
> Kernel: Linux 2.6.22-2-k7 (SMP w/1 CPU core)
> Locale: LANG=C, LC_CTYPE=C (charmap=ANSI_X3.4-1968) (ignored: LC_ALL set to C)
> Shell: /bin/sh linked to /bin/dash
> 
> -- no debconf information
> 
> 
> 
> 
> ------------------------------------------------------------------------
> 
> --- ip.7      2007-09-30 15:27:18.000000000 -0400
> +++ /tmp/ip.7 2007-10-02 02:30:48.000000000 -0400
> @@ -713,10 +713,10 @@
>  .\"
>  .TP
>  .BR ip_always_defrag " (Boolean)"
> -[New with kernel 2.2.13; in earlier kernel version the feature
> +[New with kernel 2.2.13; in earlier kernel versions this feature

Applied

>  was controlled at compile time by the
>  .B CONFIG_IP_ALWAYS_DEFRAG
> -option; this file is not present in 2.4.x and later]
> +option; this option is not present in 2.4.x and later]

Applied.

>  When this boolean frag is enabled (not equal 0) incoming fragments
>  (parts of IP packets
> @@ -726,11 +726,11 @@
>  about to be forwarded.
>  
>  Only enable if running either a firewall that is the sole link
> -to your network or a transparent proxy; never ever turn on here for a
> +to your network or a transparent proxy; never ever use it for a

Applied.

>  normal router or host.
> -Otherwise fragmented communication may me disturbed
> -when the fragments would travel over different links.
> -Defragmentation
> +Otherwise fragmented communication can be disturbed
> +when the fragments travel over different links.
> +Defragmenting

Applied.

>  also has a large memory and CPU time cost.
>  
>  This is automagically turned on when masquerading or transparent

Changes will be in 2.68.

Cheers,

Michael

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