Dear Debian maintainer,

On Tuesday, October 02, 2007, I sent you a notification about the beginning of 
a review
action on debconf templates for ppp.

Then, I sent you a bug report with rewritten templates and announcing
the beginning of the second phase of this action: call for translation
updates.

Translators have been working hard and here is now the result of their efforts.

Please consider using it EVEN if you committed files to your
development tree as long as they were reported.

The attached tarball contains:

- debian/changelog with the list of changes
- debian/control with rewrites of packages' descriptions
- debian/<templates> with all the rewritten templates file(s)
- debian/po/*.po with all PO files (existing ones and new ones)

As said, please use *at least* the PO files as provided here,
preferrably over those sent by translators in their bug reports. All
of them have been checked and reformatted. In some cases, formatting
errors have been corrected.

The patch.rfr file contains a patch for the templates and control
file(s) alone.

Please note that this patch applies to the templates and control
file(s) of your package as of Tuesday, October 02, 2007. If your package was 
updated
in the meantime, I may have updated my reference copy....but I also
may have missed that. This is indeed why I suggested you do not
modified such files while the review process was running,
remember..:-)

It is now safe to upload a new package version with these changes.

Please notify me of your intents with regards to this. 

There is of course no hurry to update your package but feel free to
contact me in case you would need sponsoring or any other action to
fix this.



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--- ppp.old/debian/ppp-udeb.templates   2007-09-23 05:20:03.737360559 +0000
+++ ppp/debian/ppp-udeb.templates       2007-10-20 06:59:06.174533189 +0000
@@ -1,3 +1,12 @@
+# These templates have been reviewed by the debian-l10n-english
+# team
+#
+# If modifications/additions/rewording are needed, please ask
+# [EMAIL PROTECTED] for advice.
+#
+# Even minor modifications require translation updates and such
+# changes should be coordinated with translators and reviewers.
+
 Template: debian-installer/ppp-udeb/title
 Type: text
 #  Main menu item
@@ -5,43 +14,43 @@
 
 Template: ppp/no_concentrators
 Type: error
-_Description: No concentrator was found
+_Description: No PPPoE concentrator
  All network interfaces have been probed, but a PPPoE concentrator was
  not detected.
  .
- The configuration of PPPoE is aborted. It can be attempted again by
+ The configuration of PPPoE has been aborted. It can be attempted again by
  selecting the relevant menu entry.
 
 Template: ppp/interface
 Type: string
 Default: _
 Description: Interface name:
- Please enter the name of the network interface connected to your PPPoE
+ Please enter the name of the network interface connected to the PPPoE
  modem.
 
 Template: ppp/username
 Type: string
-_Description: PPP login:
+_Description: ISP account username:
  Please enter the username for the PPP connection.
  .
- This information should have been provided to you by your Internet Service
+ This information should have been provided by your Internet Service
  Provider.
 
 Template: ppp/password
 Type: password
-_Description: PPP password:
+_Description: ISP account password:
  Please enter the password for the PPP connection.
  .
- This information should have been provided to you by your Internet Service
+ This information should have been provided by your Internet Service
  Provider.
 
 Template: ppp/detect_failed
 Type: error
-_Description: No Ethernet interface found
+_Description: No Ethernet interface
  PPPoE networking cannot be configured because no Ethernet interface was
  detected.
  .
- The configuration of PPPoE is aborted. It can be attempted again by
+ The configuration of PPPoE has been aborted. It can be attempted again by
  selecting the relevant menu entry.
 
 Template: ppp/detect_progress
@@ -52,21 +61,19 @@
 Type: error
 _Description: Failed authentication
  A PPPoE connection was attempted, but the provided login information was
- incorrect. Because of this the authentication failed.
+ probably incorrect.
  .
- Please make sure you type the correct username and password.
+ Please check the username and password you provided.
  .
- The configuration of PPPoE is aborted. It can be attempted again by
+ The configuration of PPPoE has been aborted. It can be attempted again by
  selecting the relevant menu entry.
 
 Template: ppp/unhandled
 Type: error
 _Description: Unhandled error
- It seems that the attempt to create a connection resulted in an unhandled
- error. Probably there is some exceptional situation which prevents
- establishing the connection.
+ An unidentified error happened while attempting to create a connection.
  .
- The configuration of PPPoE is aborted. It can be attempted again by
+ The configuration of PPPoE has been aborted. It can be attempted again by
  selecting the relevant menu entry.
 
 Template: ppp/please_wait
--- ppp.old/debian/control      2007-09-23 05:20:03.737360559 +0000
+++ ppp/debian/control  2007-10-17 05:36:05.156425932 +0000
@@ -13,13 +13,14 @@
 Conflicts: ppp-pam, ppp-udeb, pppdcapiplugin (<= 1:3.7.2005-07-09-2), makedev 
(<< 2.3.1-56)
 Replaces: ppp-pam, ppp-udeb
 Suggests: iptables
-Description: Point-to-Point Protocol (PPP) daemon
- The Point-to-Point Protocol (PPP) provides a standard way to transmit
+Description: Point-to-Point Protocol (PPP) - daemon
+ The Point-to-Point Protocol provides a standard way to transmit
  datagrams over a serial link, as well as a standard way for the machines
- at either end of the link (the "peers") to negotiate various optional
- characteristics of the link.  Using PPP, a serial link can be used to
- transmit Internet Protocol (IP) datagrams, allowing TCP/IP connections
- between the peers.
+ at either end of the link to negotiate various optional characteristics
+ of the link.
+ .
+ This package is most commonly used to manage a modem for dial-up or
+ certain kinds of broadband connections.
 
 Package: ppp-udeb
 XC-Package-Type: udeb
@@ -28,20 +29,23 @@
 Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}, ethernet-card-detection, 
ppp-modules, di-utils
 Provides: configured-network
 XB-Installer-Menu-Item: 1700
-Description: Point-to-Point Protocol (PPP) daemon
- The Point-to-Point Protocol (PPP) provides a standard way to transmit
+Description: Point-to-Point Protocol (PPP) - package for Debian Installer
+ The Point-to-Point Protocol provides a standard way to transmit
  datagrams over a serial link, as well as a standard way for the machines
- at either end of the link (the "peers") to negotiate various optional
- characteristics of the link.  Using PPP, a serial link can be used to
- transmit Internet Protocol (IP) datagrams, allowing TCP/IP connections
- between the peers.
+ at either end of the link to negotiate various optional characteristics
+ of the link.
  .
- ppp-udeb is a minimal ppp package used by the debian-installer.
+ This package is a minimal ppp package used by the Debian Installer.
 
 Package: ppp-dev
 Section: devel
 Architecture: all
 Priority: extra
 Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}
-Description: Selected headers from the ppp package
- Contains some files needed to build some packages related to pppd.
+Description: Point-to-Point Protocol (PPP) - development files
+ The Point-to-Point Protocol provides a standard way to transmit
+ datagrams over a serial link, as well as a standard way for the machines
+ at either end of the link to negotiate various optional characteristics
+ of the link.
+ .
+ This package provides files needed to build pppd-related software.
--- ppp.old/debian/changelog    2007-09-23 05:20:03.737360559 +0000
+++ ppp/debian/changelog        2007-11-10 06:25:14.431252414 +0000
@@ -1,3 +1,26 @@
+ppp (2.4.4rel-10) UNRELEASED; urgency=low
+
+  * Debconf templates and debian/control reviewed by the debian-l10n-
+    english team as part of the Smith review project. Closes: #447329
+  * [Debconf translation updates]
+  * Vietnamese. Closes: #447847
+  * German. Closes: #447902
+  * Galician. Closes: #447917
+  * Romanian. Closes: #447918
+  * Basque. Closes: #447994
+  * Finnish. Closes: #448301
+  * Spanish; Castilian. Closes: #448542
+  * Dutch; Flemish. Closes: #449022
+  * Czech. Closes: #449261
+  * Russian. Closes: #450516,#450517,#450519
+  * Portuguese. Closes: #450544
+  * French.
+  * French. Closes: #450702
+  * Norwegian Bokmål; Bokmål, Norwegian. Closes: #450724
+    24
+
+ -- Christian Perrier <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>  Sat, 10 Nov 2007 06:25:14 +0000
+
 ppp (2.4.4rel-9) unstable; urgency=low
 
   * ppp-udeb: quote username and password in pap/chap secrets since they
@@ -5,21 +28,21 @@
   * ppp-udeb: multiply by 100 the XB-Installer-Menu-Item due to renumbering in
     Debian Installer
 
- -- Eddy Petrișor <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>  Tue, 10 Apr 2007 23:11:10 +0300
+ -- Eddy Petri?or <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>  Tue, 10 Apr 2007 23:11:10 +0300
 
 ppp (2.4.4rel-8) unstable; urgency=high
 
   * urgency high since fixes an RC bug
   * make sure the /etc/resolv.conf file is world readable (Closes: #415077)
 
- -- Eddy Petrișor <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>  Sat, 17 Mar 2007 22:31:45 +0200
+ -- Eddy Petri?or <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>  Sat, 17 Mar 2007 22:31:45 +0200
 
 ppp (2.4.4rel-7) unstable; urgency=high
 
   * urgency set to high to catch the RC2 release
   * Updated translations: pt_BR  (Closes: #411544)
 
- -- Eddy Petrișor <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>  Sun,  4 Mar 2007 17:59:00 +0200
+ -- Eddy Petri?or <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>  Sun,  4 Mar 2007 17:59:00 +0200
 
 ppp (2.4.4rel-6) unstable; urgency=low
 
@@ -29,11 +52,11 @@
     - Basque, thanks to Piarres Beobide <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
     - Catalan, thanks to Jordà Polo <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> (closes: 410215)
 
- -- Eddy Petrișor <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>  Mon, 12 Feb 2007 17:36:46 +0200
+ -- Eddy Petri?or <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>  Mon, 12 Feb 2007 17:36:46 +0200
 
 ppp (2.4.4rel-5) unstable; urgency=low
 
-  [ Eddy Petrișor ]
+  [ Eddy Petri?or ]
   * added ${misc:Depends} to ppp-udeb
   * removed debconf as a dependency of ppp-udeb since such a package does not
     exist in d-i environment
@@ -69,7 +92,7 @@
   * ppp-udeb: ask for hostname and check validity (using netcfg template)
   * ppp-udeb: create /etc/hostname and basic /etc/hosts files
 
- -- Eddy Petrișor <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>  Mon, 29 Jan 2007 16:58:03 +0200
+ -- Eddy Petri?or <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>  Mon, 29 Jan 2007 16:58:03 +0200
 
 ppp (2.4.4rel-4.1) unstable; urgency=low
 
@@ -85,7 +108,7 @@
 
 ppp (2.4.4rel-4) unstable; urgency=low
 
-  [ Eddy Petrișor ]
+  [ Eddy Petri?or ]
   * Using provider as the pppoe profile name in ppp-udeb so that the
     connection starts after reboot and to integrate better with ppp helpers.
   * Implemented idempotency in ppp-udeb by following the pid file generated

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