Dear Debian maintainer,

On Wednesday, November 07, 2007, I sent you a notification about the beginning 
of a review
action on debconf templates for zephyr.

Then, I sent you a bug report with rewritten templates and announcing
the beginning of the second phase of this action: call for translation
updates.

Translators have been working hard and here is now the result of their efforts.

Please consider using it EVEN if you committed files to your
development tree as long as they were reported.

The attached tarball contains:

- debian/changelog with the list of changes
- debian/control with rewrites of packages' descriptions
- debian/<templates> with all the rewritten templates file(s)
- debian/po/*.po with all PO files (existing ones and new ones)

As said, please use *at least* the PO files as provided here,
preferrably over those sent by translators in their bug reports. All
of them have been checked and reformatted. In some cases, formatting
errors have been corrected.

The patch.rfr file contains a patch for the templates and control
file(s) alone.

Please note that this patch applies to the templates and control
file(s) of your package as of Wednesday, November 07, 2007. If your package was 
updated
in the meantime, I may have updated my reference copy....but I also
may have missed that. This is indeed why I suggested you do not
modified such files while the review process was running,
remember..:-)

It is now safe to upload a new package version with these changes.

Please notify me of your intents with regards to this. 

There is of course no hurry to update your package but feel free to
contact me in case you would need sponsoring or any other action to
fix this.



-- 


Attachment: patch.tar.gz
Description: Binary data

--- zephyr.old/debian/zephyr-clients.templates  2007-10-25 22:43:25.179785522 
+0200
+++ zephyr/debian/zephyr-clients.templates      2007-11-28 09:22:37.063726103 
+0100
@@ -1,10 +1,22 @@
+# These templates have been reviewed by the debian-l10n-english
+# team
+#
+# If modifications/additions/rewording are needed, please ask
+# [EMAIL PROTECTED] for advice.
+#
+# Even minor modifications require translation updates and such
+# changes should be coordinated with translators and reviewers.
+
 Template: zephyr-clients/servers
 Type: string
 _Description: Zephyr servers:
- Please type the full names of your zephyr servers, separated by spaces.
- (note that this can be a subset of what you're telling the servers)
- If you are using hesiod to advertise your zephyr servers, leave this
- blank.
+ Please specify the full names of the Zephyr servers, as a
+ space-separated list.
+ .
+ The list configured on clients can be a subset of the list configured
+ on servers.
+ .
+ This can be left empty if Hesiod is used to advertise Zephyr servers.
 
 Template: zephyr-clients/read_conf
 Type: boolean
--- zephyr.old/debian/zephyr-server.templates   2007-10-25 22:43:25.179785522 
+0200
+++ zephyr/debian/zephyr-server.templates       2007-11-28 09:22:37.063726103 
+0100
@@ -1,8 +1,20 @@
+# These templates have been reviewed by the debian-l10n-english
+# team
+#
+# If modifications/additions/rewording are needed, please ask
+# [EMAIL PROTECTED] for advice.
+#
+# Even minor modifications require translation updates and such
+# changes should be coordinated with translators and reviewers.
+
 Template: zephyr-server/servers
 Type: string
 _Description: Zephyr servers:
- Please type the full names of your zephyr servers, separated by spaces.
- (Note that this can be a superset of that you're telling the clients.)
+ Please specify the full names of the Zephyr servers, as a
+ space-separated list.
+ .
+ The list configured on clients can be a subset of the list configured
+ on servers.
 
 Template: zephyr-server/read_conf
 Type: boolean
--- zephyr.old/debian/control   2007-10-25 22:43:25.179785522 +0200
+++ zephyr/debian/control       2007-11-29 17:55:23.144417939 +0100
@@ -11,11 +11,13 @@
 Architecture: any
 Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}
 Conflicts: libzephyr3-krb
-Description: The original "Instant Message" system libraries without Kerberos
- This is the Project Athena Zephyr notification system 2000/04/21 snapshot.
- Zephyr allows users to send messages to other users or to groups of
- users.  Users can view incoming Zephyr messages as windowgrams
- (transient X windows) or as text on a terminal.
+Description: Project Athena's notification service - non-Kerberos libraries
+ Zephyr is derived from the original Project Athena 'Instant Message' system
+ and allows users to send messages to other users or to groups of users.
+ Users can view incoming Zephyr messages as windowgrams (transient X
+ windows) or as text on a terminal.
+ .
+ This package provides the libraries without Kerberos support.
 
 Package: libzephyr3-krb
 Section: libs
@@ -23,75 +25,73 @@
 Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, krb4-config
 Conflicts: libzephyr3
 Provides: libzephyr3
-Description: The original "Instant Message" system libraries with Kerberos 
- This version of the library uses Kerberos for message authentication.
+Description: Project Athena's notification service - libraries with Kerberos
+ Zephyr is derived from the original Project Athena 'Instant Message' system
+ and allows users to send messages to other users or to groups of users.
+ Users can view incoming Zephyr messages as windowgrams (transient X
+ windows) or as text on a terminal.
  .
- This is the Project Athena Zephyr notification system 2000/04/21 snapshot.
- Zephyr allows users to send messages to other users or to groups of
- users.  Users can view incoming Zephyr messages as windowgrams
- (transient X windows) or as text on a terminal.
+ This package provides libraries that use Kerberos.
 
 Package: zephyr-clients
 Section: net
 Replaces: zephyr-client
 Architecture: any
 Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, debianutils (>= 1.6), debconf | debconf-2.0
-Description: The original "Instant Message" system client
- This package only contains the clients; you'll need a server to talk to.
+Description: Project Athena's notification service - client programs
+ Zephyr is derived from the original Project Athena 'Instant Message' system
+ and allows users to send messages to other users or to groups of users.
+ Users can view incoming Zephyr messages as windowgrams (transient X
+ windows) or as text on a terminal.
  .
- This is the Project Athena Zephyr notification system 2000/04/21 snapshot.
- Zephyr allows users to send messages to other users or to groups of
- users.  Users can view incoming Zephyr messages as windowgrams
- (transient X windows) or as text on a terminal.
+ This package provides client programs for the messaging service.
 
 Package: zephyr-server
 Section: net
 Architecture: any
 Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, debconf | debconf-2.0
 Conflicts: zephyr-server-krb
-Description: The original "Instant Message" system-server without Kerberos
- You probably only need one server for a group of clients.
- This can be a memory-intensive server, especially for very large sites.
- .
- The server maintains a location and subscription database for all the
- receiving clients. All zephyrgrams are sent to the server to be routed
- to the intended recipient.
- .
- This is the Project Athena Zephyr notification system 2000/04/21 snapshot.
- Zephyr allows users to send messages to other users or to groups of
- users.  Users can view incoming Zephyr messages as windowgrams
- (transient X windows) or as text on a terminal.
+Description: Project Athena's notification service - non-Kerberos server
+ Zephyr is derived from the original Project Athena 'Instant Message' system
+ and allows users to send messages to other users or to groups of users.
+ Users can view incoming Zephyr messages as windowgrams (transient X
+ windows) or as text on a terminal.
+ .
+ This package provides the server for the messaging service, which
+ maintains a location and subscription database for all the receiving
+ clients. All zephyrgrams are sent to the server to be routed to the
+ intended recipient. Only one server is required for a group of clients.
 
 Package: zephyr-server-krb
 Section: net
 Architecture: any
 Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, debconf | debconf-2.0, libzephyr3-krb
 Conflicts: zephyr-server
-Description: The original "Instant Message" system-server with Kerberos
- You probably only need one server for a group of clients.
- This can be a memory-intensive server, especially for very large sites.
+Description: Project Athena's notification service - server with Kerberos
+ Zephyr is derived from the original Project Athena 'Instant Message' system
+ and allows users to send messages to other users or to groups of users.
+ Users can view incoming Zephyr messages as windowgrams (transient X
+ windows) or as text on a terminal.
+ .
+ This package provides the server for the messaging service. Only one
+ server is needed for a group of client. The program consumes much memory,
+ especially for very large sites.
  .
  The server maintains a location and subscription database for all the
  receiving clients. All zephyrgrams are sent to the server to be routed
  to the intended recipient.
  .
- This version of the server uses Kerberos for message authentication.
- .
- This is the Project Athena Zephyr notification system 2000/04/21 snapshot.
- Zephyr allows users to send messages to other users or to groups of
- users.  Users can view incoming Zephyr messages as windowgrams
- (transient X windows) or as text on a terminal.
+ This version of the server uses Kerberos.
 
 Package: libzephyr-dev
 Section: libdevel
 Architecture: any
 Depends: libzephyr3 (= ${binary:Version}) | libzephyr3-krb (= 
${binary:Version}), libc6-dev
-Description: The original "Instant Message" system development libraries
- This package is needed to compile certain other zephyr clients. There are
- various other clients available, including a totally gratuitous Motif client,
- a Tcl client, several Emacs clients, and a number of X clients.
- .
- This is the Project Athena Zephyr notification system 2000/04/21 snapshot.
- Zephyr allows users to send messages to other users or to groups of
- users.  Users can view incoming Zephyr messages as windowgrams
- (transient X windows) or as text on a terminal.
+Description: Project Athena's notification service - development files
+ Zephyr is derived from the original Project Athena 'Instant Message' system
+ and allows users to send messages to other users or to groups of users.
+ Users can view incoming Zephyr messages as windowgrams (transient X
+ windows) or as text on a terminal.
+ .
+ This package provides development libraries and files, which are
+ needed to compile alternative Zephyr clients.
--- zephyr.old/debian/changelog 2007-10-25 22:43:25.179785522 +0200
+++ zephyr/debian/changelog     2007-12-24 12:12:41.336634532 +0100
@@ -1,3 +1,31 @@
+zephyr (2.1.20070719.SNAPSHOT-3) UNRELEASED; urgency=low
+
+  * Debconf templates and debian/control reviewed by the debian-l10n-
+    english team as part of the Smith review project. Closes: #453291
+  * [Debconf translation updates]
+  * Galician. Closes: #454511
+  * Finnish. Closes: #454608
+  * Czech. Closes: #455240
+  * Spanish; Castilian. Closes: #455576
+  * Italian. Closes: #456225
+  * Basque. Closes: #456823
+  * German. Closes: #456981
+  * Dutch; Flemish. Closes: #457034
+  * Russian. Closes: #457087
+  * Portuguese. Closes: #457111
+  * Vietnamese. Closes: #457301
+  * French. Closes: #457560
+
+ -- Christian Perrier <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>  Mon, 24 Dec 2007 12:12:34 +0100
+
+zephyr (2.1.20070719.SNAPSHOT-2) UNRELEASED; urgency=low
+
+  * Debconf templates and debian/control reviewed by the debian-l10n-
+    english team as part of the Smith review project. Closes: #453291
+  * [Debconf translation updates]
+
+ -- Christian Perrier <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>  Wed, 28 Nov 2007 17:16:55 +0000
+
 zephyr (2.1.20070719.SNAPSHOT-1) unstable; urgency=low
 
   * new upstream, Closes: #433603

Attachment: signature.asc
Description: Digital signature

Reply via email to