Package: xbomb Version: 2.1a-7 Severity: normal Tags: patch
Hello, there are mistakes in the package description. The 2nd sentence states that there are square, hexagonal and triangular grids. This leads the reader to conclude that these grids have square, hexagonal or triangular outer shape, which is wrong. In fact all grids are rectangular regarding their outer shape but the fields, they are made of, have different shapes. IMO it should read something like "grids of squares...". I attached a patch, which also includes some minor corrections in punctuation and adds a missing pronoun. Please consider updating the package description, thanks! -- System Information: Debian Release: lenny/sid APT prefers unstable APT policy: (990, 'unstable'), (500, 'stable') Architecture: amd64 (x86_64) Kernel: Linux 2.6.25-amd64-k8-custom (SMP w/2 CPU cores; PREEMPT) Locale: LANG=de_DE.UTF-8, LC_CTYPE=de_DE.UTF-8 (charmap=UTF-8) Shell: /bin/sh linked to /bin/dash Versions of packages xbomb depends on: ii libc6 2.7-12 GNU C Library: Shared libraries ii libx11-6 2:1.1.4-2 X11 client-side library ii libxaw7 2:1.0.4-2 X11 Athena Widget library ii libxmu6 2:1.0.4-1 X11 miscellaneous utility library ii libxt6 1:1.0.5-3 X11 toolkit intrinsics library xbomb recommends no packages. -- no debconf information
--- control.orig 2008-07-10 15:59:00.000000000 +0200 +++ control.new 2008-07-10 16:25:37.000000000 +0200 @@ -9,8 +9,8 @@ Priority: optional Description: a 'minesweeper' game with squares, hexagons or triangles A test of speed and logic to find the location of bombs hidden in a grid. - Offers the standard square grid, plus hexagonal and triangular grids, each - in 3 difficulty levels, all games played against the clock, with a + It offers the standard grid of squares, plus grids of hexagons or triangles, each + in 3 difficulty levels. All games are played against the clock with a high-score table for each combination. . Homepage: http://www.gedanken.demon.co.uk/xbomb/
