On Tue, 3 Feb 2009 01:25:48 +0100 "W. Martin Borgert" <[email protected]>
wrote:
> I changed / into /target in the document. Is this OK? I wonder
> whether the next sentence is also questionable: "contents of
> /boot" is really "contents of /target/boot", right?
Then sentence is now:
You need access to the contents of /boot, /sbin and /usr directories.
This is not exactly wrong, you need access to /boot, /sbin and /usr from
the local disc, so it would be clearer to change to
"You need access to the contents of the /boot, /sbin and /usr directories
from your harddisc."
Eventuelly even:
"You need access to the contents of the /boot, /sbin and /usr directories
from your harddisc, which should now be available under /target/boot,
/target/sbin and /target/usr."
Holger
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