Package: aolserver4
Version: N/A
Severity: normal
Tags: patch

Dear Debian maintainer,

On Monday, March 09, 2009, I notified you of the beginning of a review process
concerning debconf templates for aolserver4.

The debian-l10n-english contributors have now reviewed these templates,
and the proposed changes are attached to this bug report.

Please review the suggested changes, and if you have any
objections, let me know in the next 3 days.

However, please try to avoid uploading aolserver4 with these changes
right now.

The second phase of this process will begin on Saturday, March 28, 2009, when I 
will
coordinate updates to translations of debconf templates.

The existing translators will be notified of the changes: they will
receive an updated PO file for their language.

Simultaneously, a general call for new translations will be sent to
the debian-i18n mailing list.

Both these calls for translations will request updates to be sent as
individual bug reports. That will probably trigger a lot of bug
reports against your package, but these should be easier to deal with.

The call for translation updates and new translations will run until
about Saturday, April 18, 2009. Please avoid uploading a package with fixed or 
changed
debconf templates and/or translation updates in the meantime. Of
course, other changes are safe.

Please note that this is an approximative delay, which depends on my
own availability to process this work and is influenced by the fact
that I simultaneously work on many packages.

Around Sunday, April 19, 2009, I will contact you again and will send a final 
patch
summarizing all the updates (changes to debconf templates,
updates to debconf translations and new debconf translations).

Again, thanks for your attention and cooperation.


-- System Information:
Debian Release: squeeze/sid
  APT prefers unstable
  APT policy: (500, 'unstable'), (1, 'experimental')
Architecture: i386 (i686)

Kernel: Linux 2.6.28-1-686 (SMP w/1 CPU core)
Locale: LANG=C, LC_CTYPE=C (charmap=ANSI_X3.4-1968)
Shell: /bin/sh linked to /bin/dash
--- aolserver4.old/debian/aolserver4.templates  2009-03-09 08:26:43.163102951 
+0100
+++ aolserver4/debian/aolserver4.templates      2009-03-25 09:21:26.635341871 
+0100
@@ -1,33 +1,38 @@
+# These templates have been reviewed by the debian-l10n-english
+# team
+#
+# If modifications/additions/rewording are needed, please ask
+# debian-l10n-engl...@lists.debian.org for advice.
+#
+# Even minor modifications require translation updates and such
+# changes should be coordinated with translators and reviewers.
+
 Template: aolserver4/hostname
 Type: string
 Default: localhost
-_Description:  Server hostname:
- AOLserver server needs an hostname to be exposed on redirect pages URL and for
- informative purposes to identify itself.
+_Description: Server hostname:
+ AOLserver needs a hostname to use for redirect page URLs and for 
+ identifying itself.
  .
- It is generally the fully-qualified DNS hostname of the computer or
- localhost, if it is not networked. Any name which can be legally
- considered for a URL string can be used.
+ It is generally the fully-qualified DNS hostname of the computer, or
+ localhost if it is not networked. Any name valid for a URL string can
+ be used.
 
 Template: aolserver4/address
 Type: string
 Default: 127.0.0.1
-_Description:  Server IP address number:
- AOLserver needs at least an IP address to listen to.
- It is generally the primary Ethernet interface (or the loopback address,
- if the server will be used just locally).
+_Description: Server IP address:
+ AOLserver needs an IP address to listen to.
  .
- The default address is the loopback one, which is not recommended
- for general (network or Internet) use.
+ The default is the address of the loopback interface. If the server
+ is to be remotely accessible this should be replaced by the address
+ of the appropriate network interface.
 
 Template: aolserver4/port
 Type: string
 Default: 80
-_Description:  Server TCP port:
+_Description: Server TCP port:
  AOLserver needs a port number assigned for its use. This is almost always
  port 80 (the standard HTTP port), but might be different if another
  web server is installed, or some other service is listening on
  that port.
- .
- It is recommended using the default.
- .
--- aolserver4.old/debian/control       2009-03-09 08:26:43.146951462 +0100
+++ aolserver4/debian/control   2009-03-23 07:48:41.970462241 +0100
@@ -14,33 +14,34 @@
 Recommends: aolserver4-doc
 Conflicts: aolserver4-nscache
 Replaces: aolserver4-nscache
-Description: AOL Web Server 4 (Program)
- This is the web engine that powers the mighty America On-Line.  It
- is capable of serving a tremendous number of users, and can publish
- hundreds of virtual servers within the same process at the same time.
+Description: AOL web server version 4 - program files
+ AOLserver is the web engine that powers America Online. It
+ is capable of serving a very high number of users, and can host
+ hundreds of virtual servers simultaneously within the same process.
  .
  It is similar in many respects to Zope, except based largely on Tcl.
  It is multi-threaded, and has a C API that can be used to extend
  its functionality.
+ .
+ This package provides the server itself.
 
 Package: aolserver4-core
 Architecture: any
 Depends: debconf (>= 1.2.9) | debconf-2.0, ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}
 Provides: httpd, httpd-cgi
 Recommends: aolserver4-doc
-Description: AOL Web Server 4 (Core libraries)
- This is the web engine that powers the mighty America On-Line.  It
- is capable of serving a tremendous number of users, and can publish
- hundreds of virtual servers within the same process at the same time.
+Description: AOL web server version 4 - core libraries
+ AOLserver is the web engine that powers America Online. It
+ is capable of serving a very high number of users, and can host
+ hundreds of virtual servers simultaneously within the same process.
  .
  It is similar in many respects to Zope, except based largely on Tcl.
  It is multi-threaded, and has a C API that can be used to extend
  its functionality.
  .
- This package contains the basic shared libraries which are useful
- for building add-on modules and are used also by the daemon.
- It does *not* contain the AOLserver daemon, which can be installed 
- using aolserver4 package instead.
+ This package provides the basic shared libraries which are needed by
+ the daemon and are also useful for building add-on modules. It does
+ not contain the AOLserver daemon, which is in aolserver4.
 
 Package: aolserver4-dev
 Section: devel
@@ -48,13 +49,17 @@
 Depends: aolserver4-core (= ${binary:Version}), tcl-dev (>= 8.4), zlib1g-dev | 
libz-dev, ${misc:Depends}
 Suggests: aolserver4-doc, aolserver4
 Conflicts: aolserver4 (<< 4.5.1-1)
-Description: AOL Web Server 4 (Development Tools)
- This package includes the header files and static libraries needed
- to compile extensions and modules for AOLserver.  The header files
- used to be part of the AOLserver package, but have been moved to
- this new package to reduce cruft on non-developer systems.
+Description: AOL web server version 4 - development files
+ AOLserver is the web engine that powers America Online. It
+ is capable of serving a very high number of users, and can host
+ hundreds of virtual servers simultaneously within the same process.
+ .
+ It is similar in many respects to Zope, except based largely on Tcl.
+ It is multi-threaded, and has a C API that can be used to extend
+ its functionality.
  .
- This package contains version 4.x of AOLServer Development Tools. 
+ This package contains header files and libraries needed to develop
+ applications based on AOLserver.
  
 Package: aolserver4-doc
 Section: doc
@@ -62,18 +67,24 @@
 Depends: ${misc:Depends}
 Recommends: www-browser
 Suggests: aolserver4, tcl-doc
-Description: AOL Web Server 4 (Documentation)
- This package contains three reference manuals relating to AOLserver.
- The manuals document Version 3+ of AOLserver.
- .
- (1)  The AOLserver Administrator's Guide covers the setup options
-      and security issues relating to running the server.
- (2)  The AOLserver Tcl Developer's Guide covers the Tcl API which
-      can be used to add features to your web pages (similar in
-      some respects to PHP or Microsoft's ASP)
- (3)  The AOLserver C Developer's Guide covers the C API which can
-      be used to create new modules to extend AOLserver.
- .
- This the latest available version of AOLServer documentation, but
- it is quite outdated and incomplete. Un up-to-date API documentation
- is available at http://panoptic.com/wiki/aolserver/Tcl_API
+Description: AOL web server version 4 - documentation
+ AOLserver is the web engine that powers America Online. It
+ is capable of serving a very high number of users, and can host
+ hundreds of virtual servers simultaneously within the same process.
+ .
+ It is similar in many respects to Zope, except based largely on Tcl.
+ It is multi-threaded, and has a C API that can be used to extend
+ its functionality.
+ .
+ This package contains three reference manuals for AOLserver version 3+:
+  - The AOLserver Administrator's Guide covers the setup options
+    and security issues relating to running the server;
+  - The AOLserver Tcl Developer's Guide covers the Tcl API which
+    can be used to add features to your web pages (similar in
+    some respects to PHP or Microsoft's ASP);
+  - The AOLserver C Developer's Guide covers the C API which can
+    be used to create new modules to extend AOLserver.
+ .
+ This is the latest available version of the documentation, but it is
+ quite outdated and incomplete. More up-to-date API documentation is
+ available at http://panoptic.com/wiki/aolserver/Tcl_API.

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