The attached patch should replace the one sent originally. A double
question mark was indeed left in the rewritten debconf
templates. Sorry for the trouble.

-- 


--- canna.old/debian/templates  2009-02-14 12:20:04.323869668 +0100
+++ canna/debian/templates      2009-04-19 20:24:07.378769260 +0200
@@ -1,46 +1,51 @@
+# These templates have been reviewed by the debian-l10n-english
+# team
+#
+# If modifications/additions/rewording are needed, please ask
+# [email protected] for advice.
+#
+# Even minor modifications require translation updates and such
+# changes should be coordinated with translators and reviewers.
+
 Template: canna/run_cannaserver
 Type: boolean
 Default: true
-_Description: Do you want to run the Canna server ?
+_Description: Should the Canna server run automatically?
  This package contains the Canna server and server-related
  utilities. If you are only interested in these utilities,
- you can disable the Canna server here.
+ you can disable the Canna server now.
 
 
 Template: canna/run_with_inet
 Type: boolean
 Default: false
-_Description: Do you want to connect to the Canna server from a remote host?
- The Canna server only allows connections via UNIX domain
- sockets when the `-inet' option is not specified.  This
- means that when the Canna server is started without the `-inet' option,
- only clients which run on the same host can connect to the server.
- Some clients such as, `egg' and `yc-el', do not support
- UNIX domain socket and require the `-inet' option, even if they run on
- the same host.
+_Description: Should the Canna server run in network mode?         
+ By default the Canna server will run without support for network
+ connections, and will only accept connections on UNIX domain sockets,
+ from clients running on the same host.
  .
- If you want to connect to this Canna server from remote hosts, or
- if you want to use INET-domain-only software, you should run
- the server with the `-inet' option.
+ If you choose this option, network support will be activated, and the
+ Canna server will accept connections on TCP sockets from clients that
+ may be on remote hosts. Some clients (such as egg and yc-el) require
+ this mode even if they run on the local host.
 
 
 Template: canna/manage_allow_hosts_with_debconf
 Type: boolean
 Default: true
-_Description: Manage /etc/hosts.canna with debconf ?
- /etc/hosts.canna controls which hosts can connect to this server.
+_Description: Manage /etc/hosts.canna automatically?
+ The /etc/hosts.canna file lists hosts allowed to connect to the
+ Canna server.
  .
- By default /etc/hosts.canna will be managed with debconf.
- Refuse here if you want to manage /etc/hosts.canna yourself.
+ You should not accept this option if you prefer managing the
+ file's contents manually.
 
 
 Template: canna/allow_hosts
 Type: string
 Default: unix localhost
-_Description: Please enter the name of each host allowed to connect to this 
server
+_Description: Hosts allowed to connect to this Canna server:
  Please enter the names of the hosts allowed to connect to this Canna server,
  separated by spaces.
  .
- `unix'  is a special notation for allowing access
- via UNIX domain sockets.
-
+ You can use "unix" to allow access via UNIX domain sockets.
--- canna.old/debian/libcanna1g.templates       2009-02-14 12:20:04.323869668 
+0100
+++ canna/debian/libcanna1g.templates   2009-04-14 07:27:19.167323447 +0200
@@ -1,20 +1,27 @@
+# These templates have been reviewed by the debian-l10n-english
+# team
+#
+# If modifications/additions/rewording are needed, please ask
+# [email protected] for advice.
+#
+# Even minor modifications require translation updates and such
+# changes should be coordinated with translators and reviewers.
+
 Template: canna/default_style
 Type: select
 Choices: verbose, 1.1, 1.2, jdaemin, just, lan5, matsu, skk, tut, unix, vje, 
wx2+
 Default: verbose
-_Description: Canna input style
- Please choose the default canna input style below, which will be installed if
- there is no previous configuration:
- .
-  verbose - Canna3.5 default style with verbose comments
-  1.1     - old Canna style (ver. 1.1)
-  1.2     - old Canna style (ver. 1.2)
-  jdaemon - jdaemon style
-  just    - Justsystem ATOK like style
-  lan5    - LAN5 like style
-  matsu   - MATSU word processor like style
-  skk     - SKK like style
-  tut     - for TUT-Code
-  unix    - UNIX style
-  vje     - vje like style
-  wx2+    - WX2+ style
+_Description: Canna input style:
+ Please choose the default Canna input style:
+  verbose: Canna3.5 default style with verbose comments;
+  1.1    : old Canna style (ver. 1.1);
+  1.2    : old Canna style (ver. 1.2);
+  jdaemon: jdaemon style;
+  just   : JustSystems ATOK style;
+  lan5   : LAN5 style;
+  matsu  : Matsu word processor style;
+  skk    : SKK style;
+  tut    : TUT-Code style;
+  unix   : UNIX style;
+  vje    : vje style;
+  wx2+   : WX2+ style.
--- canna.old/debian/control    2009-02-14 12:20:04.323869668 +0100
+++ canna/debian/control        2009-04-05 17:08:13.327985238 +0200
@@ -11,36 +11,44 @@
 Conflicts: canna-server, libcanna1g (<= 3.5b2-33)
 Replaces: canna-server
 Suggests: canna-shion
-Description: Japanese input system (server and dictionary)
- Canna is a Japanese input system available in Free Software.
- Canna provides a unified user interface for inputting Japanese.
- .
- Canna supports Nemacs, Mule, kinput2 and canuum.  All of these
- tools can be used by a single customization file, romaji-to-kana
- conversion rules and conversion dictionaries, and input Japanese in
- the same way.
+Description: input system for Japanese - server and dictionary
+ Canna provides a unified user interface for Japanese input. It is based
+ on a client-server model and supports automatic kana-to-kanji conversion.
  .
- Canna converts kana to kanji based on a client-server model and
- supports automatic kana-to-kanji conversion.
+ It supports multiple clients (including kinput2 and canuum), and allows
+ them all to work in the same way, sharing customization files,
+ romaji-to-kana conversion rules and conversion dictionaries.
  .
- This package includes the cannaserver program and dictionary files.
+ This package provides the Canna server program and dictionary files.
 
 Package: canna-utils
 Architecture: any
 Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}
 Conflicts: canna (<= 3.5b2-33), libcanna1g (<= 3.5b2-33)
-Description: Japanese input system (utility)
- Canna is a Japanese input system available in Free Software.
- This package includes canna client programs.
+Description: input system for Japanese - utilities
+ Canna provides a unified user interface for Japanese input. It is based
+ on a client-server model and supports automatic kana-to-kanji conversion.
+ .
+ It supports multiple clients (including kinput2 and canuum), and allows
+ them all to work in the same way, sharing customization files,
+ romaji-to-kana conversion rules and conversion dictionaries.
+ .
+ This package provides client programs for Canna.
 
 Package: libcanna1g
 Section: libs
 Architecture: any
 Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, debconf
 Conflicts: canna (<= 3.5b2-33)
-Description: Canna Runtime Library
- Canna is a Japanese input system available in Free Software.
- This package includes canna shared libraries.
+Description: input system for Japanese - runtime library
+ Canna provides a unified user interface for Japanese input. It is based
+ on a client-server model and supports automatic kana-to-kanji conversion.
+ .
+ It supports multiple clients (including kinput2 and canuum), and allows
+ them all to work in the same way, sharing customization files,
+ romaji-to-kana conversion rules and conversion dictionaries.
+ .
+ This package provides shared libraries for Canna.
 
 Package: libcanna1g-dev
 Section: libdevel
@@ -48,6 +56,13 @@
 Depends: libcanna1g
 Conflicts: canna-dev, libcanna1-dev, canna (<= 3.5b2-23)
 Replaces: canna-dev
-Description: Canna Static Library and Headers
- Canna is a Japanese input system available in Free Software.
- This package includes header and static libraries.
+Description: input system for Japanese - development files
+ Canna provides a unified user interface for Japanese input. It is based
+ on a client-server model and supports automatic kana-to-kanji conversion.
+ .
+ It supports multiple clients (including kinput2 and canuum), and allows
+ them all to work in the same way, sharing customization files,
+ romaji-to-kana conversion rules and conversion dictionaries.
+ .
+ This package provides the headers and static libraries needed to develop
+ software based on Canna.
--- canna.old/debian/changelog  2009-02-14 12:20:04.323869668 +0100
+++ canna/debian/changelog      2009-04-14 17:55:35.906452566 +0200
@@ -1,3 +1,11 @@
+canna (3.7p3-6.2) UNRELEASED; urgency=low
+
+  * Debconf templates and debian/control reviewed by the debian-l10n-
+    english team as part of the Smith review project. Closes: #523990
+  * [Debconf translation updates]
+
+ -- Christian Perrier <[email protected]>  Tue, 14 Apr 2009 17:55:30 +0200
+
 canna (3.7p3-6.1) unstable; urgency=low
 
   * Non-maintainer upload to fix pending l10n issues.

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