Dear Debian maintainer,

On Monday, March 30, 2009, I sent you a notification about the beginning of a 
review
action on debconf templates for canna.

Then, I sent you a bug report with rewritten templates and announcing
the beginning of the second phase of this action: call for translation
updates.

Translators have been working hard and here is now the result of their efforts.

Please consider using it EVEN if you committed files to your
development tree as long as they were reported.

The attached tarball contains:

- debian/changelog with the list of changes
- debian/control with rewrites of packages' descriptions
- debian/<templates> with all the rewritten templates file(s)
- debian/po/*.po with all PO files (existing ones and new ones)

As said, please use *at least* the PO files as provided here,
preferrably over those sent by translators in their bug reports. All
of them have been checked and reformatted. In some cases, formatting
errors have been corrected.

The patch.rfr file contains a patch for the templates and control
file(s) alone.

Please note that this patch applies to the templates and control
file(s) of your package as of Monday, March 30, 2009. If your package was 
updated
in the meantime, I may have updated my reference copy....but I also
may have missed that. This is indeed why I suggested you do not
modified such files while the review process was running,
remember..:-)

It is now safe to upload a new package version with these changes.

Please notify me of your intents with regards to this. 

There is of course no hurry to update your package but feel free to
contact me in case you would need sponsoring or any other action to
fix this.



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--- canna.old/debian/templates  2009-02-14 12:20:04.323869668 +0100
+++ canna/debian/templates      2009-05-03 07:53:05.972745748 +0200
@@ -1,46 +1,51 @@
+# These templates have been reviewed by the debian-l10n-english
+# team
+#
+# If modifications/additions/rewording are needed, please ask
+# debian-l10n-engl...@lists.debian.org for advice.
+#
+# Even minor modifications require translation updates and such
+# changes should be coordinated with translators and reviewers.
+
 Template: canna/run_cannaserver
 Type: boolean
 Default: true
-_Description: Do you want to run the Canna server ?
+_Description: Should the Canna server run automatically?
  This package contains the Canna server and server-related
  utilities. If you are only interested in these utilities,
- you can disable the Canna server here.
+ you can disable the Canna server now.
 
 
 Template: canna/run_with_inet
 Type: boolean
 Default: false
-_Description: Do you want to connect to the Canna server from a remote host?
- The Canna server only allows connections via UNIX domain
- sockets when the `-inet' option is not specified.  This
- means that when the Canna server is started without the `-inet' option,
- only clients which run on the same host can connect to the server.
- Some clients such as, `egg' and `yc-el', do not support
- UNIX domain socket and require the `-inet' option, even if they run on
- the same host.
+_Description: Should the Canna server run in network mode?
+ By default the Canna server will run without support for network
+ connections, and will only accept connections on UNIX domain sockets,
+ from clients running on the same host.
  .
- If you want to connect to this Canna server from remote hosts, or
- if you want to use INET-domain-only software, you should run
- the server with the `-inet' option.
+ If you choose this option, network support will be activated, and the
+ Canna server will accept connections on TCP sockets from clients that
+ may be on remote hosts. Some clients (such as egg and yc-el) require
+ this mode even if they run on the local host.
 
 
 Template: canna/manage_allow_hosts_with_debconf
 Type: boolean
 Default: true
-_Description: Manage /etc/hosts.canna with debconf ?
- /etc/hosts.canna controls which hosts can connect to this server.
+_Description: Manage /etc/hosts.canna automatically?
+ The /etc/hosts.canna file lists hosts allowed to connect to the
+ Canna server.
  .
- By default /etc/hosts.canna will be managed with debconf.
- Refuse here if you want to manage /etc/hosts.canna yourself.
+ You should not accept this option if you prefer managing the
+ file's contents manually.
 
 
 Template: canna/allow_hosts
 Type: string
 Default: unix localhost
-_Description: Please enter the name of each host allowed to connect to this 
server
+_Description: Hosts allowed to connect to this Canna server:
  Please enter the names of the hosts allowed to connect to this Canna server,
  separated by spaces.
  .
- `unix'  is a special notation for allowing access
- via UNIX domain sockets.
-
+ You can use "unix" to allow access via UNIX domain sockets.
--- canna.old/debian/libcanna1g.templates       2009-02-14 12:20:04.323869668 
+0100
+++ canna/debian/libcanna1g.templates   2009-04-14 07:27:19.167323447 +0200
@@ -1,20 +1,27 @@
+# These templates have been reviewed by the debian-l10n-english
+# team
+#
+# If modifications/additions/rewording are needed, please ask
+# debian-l10n-engl...@lists.debian.org for advice.
+#
+# Even minor modifications require translation updates and such
+# changes should be coordinated with translators and reviewers.
+
 Template: canna/default_style
 Type: select
 Choices: verbose, 1.1, 1.2, jdaemin, just, lan5, matsu, skk, tut, unix, vje, 
wx2+
 Default: verbose
-_Description: Canna input style
- Please choose the default canna input style below, which will be installed if
- there is no previous configuration:
- .
-  verbose - Canna3.5 default style with verbose comments
-  1.1     - old Canna style (ver. 1.1)
-  1.2     - old Canna style (ver. 1.2)
-  jdaemon - jdaemon style
-  just    - Justsystem ATOK like style
-  lan5    - LAN5 like style
-  matsu   - MATSU word processor like style
-  skk     - SKK like style
-  tut     - for TUT-Code
-  unix    - UNIX style
-  vje     - vje like style
-  wx2+    - WX2+ style
+_Description: Canna input style:
+ Please choose the default Canna input style:
+  verbose: Canna3.5 default style with verbose comments;
+  1.1    : old Canna style (ver. 1.1);
+  1.2    : old Canna style (ver. 1.2);
+  jdaemon: jdaemon style;
+  just   : JustSystems ATOK style;
+  lan5   : LAN5 style;
+  matsu  : Matsu word processor style;
+  skk    : SKK style;
+  tut    : TUT-Code style;
+  unix   : UNIX style;
+  vje    : vje style;
+  wx2+   : WX2+ style.
--- canna.old/debian/control    2009-02-14 12:20:04.323869668 +0100
+++ canna/debian/control        2009-04-05 17:08:13.327985238 +0200
@@ -11,36 +11,44 @@
 Conflicts: canna-server, libcanna1g (<= 3.5b2-33)
 Replaces: canna-server
 Suggests: canna-shion
-Description: Japanese input system (server and dictionary)
- Canna is a Japanese input system available in Free Software.
- Canna provides a unified user interface for inputting Japanese.
- .
- Canna supports Nemacs, Mule, kinput2 and canuum.  All of these
- tools can be used by a single customization file, romaji-to-kana
- conversion rules and conversion dictionaries, and input Japanese in
- the same way.
+Description: input system for Japanese - server and dictionary
+ Canna provides a unified user interface for Japanese input. It is based
+ on a client-server model and supports automatic kana-to-kanji conversion.
  .
- Canna converts kana to kanji based on a client-server model and
- supports automatic kana-to-kanji conversion.
+ It supports multiple clients (including kinput2 and canuum), and allows
+ them all to work in the same way, sharing customization files,
+ romaji-to-kana conversion rules and conversion dictionaries.
  .
- This package includes the cannaserver program and dictionary files.
+ This package provides the Canna server program and dictionary files.
 
 Package: canna-utils
 Architecture: any
 Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}
 Conflicts: canna (<= 3.5b2-33), libcanna1g (<= 3.5b2-33)
-Description: Japanese input system (utility)
- Canna is a Japanese input system available in Free Software.
- This package includes canna client programs.
+Description: input system for Japanese - utilities
+ Canna provides a unified user interface for Japanese input. It is based
+ on a client-server model and supports automatic kana-to-kanji conversion.
+ .
+ It supports multiple clients (including kinput2 and canuum), and allows
+ them all to work in the same way, sharing customization files,
+ romaji-to-kana conversion rules and conversion dictionaries.
+ .
+ This package provides client programs for Canna.
 
 Package: libcanna1g
 Section: libs
 Architecture: any
 Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, debconf
 Conflicts: canna (<= 3.5b2-33)
-Description: Canna Runtime Library
- Canna is a Japanese input system available in Free Software.
- This package includes canna shared libraries.
+Description: input system for Japanese - runtime library
+ Canna provides a unified user interface for Japanese input. It is based
+ on a client-server model and supports automatic kana-to-kanji conversion.
+ .
+ It supports multiple clients (including kinput2 and canuum), and allows
+ them all to work in the same way, sharing customization files,
+ romaji-to-kana conversion rules and conversion dictionaries.
+ .
+ This package provides shared libraries for Canna.
 
 Package: libcanna1g-dev
 Section: libdevel
@@ -48,6 +56,13 @@
 Depends: libcanna1g
 Conflicts: canna-dev, libcanna1-dev, canna (<= 3.5b2-23)
 Replaces: canna-dev
-Description: Canna Static Library and Headers
- Canna is a Japanese input system available in Free Software.
- This package includes header and static libraries.
+Description: input system for Japanese - development files
+ Canna provides a unified user interface for Japanese input. It is based
+ on a client-server model and supports automatic kana-to-kanji conversion.
+ .
+ It supports multiple clients (including kinput2 and canuum), and allows
+ them all to work in the same way, sharing customization files,
+ romaji-to-kana conversion rules and conversion dictionaries.
+ .
+ This package provides the headers and static libraries needed to develop
+ software based on Canna.
--- canna.old/debian/changelog  2009-02-14 12:20:04.323869668 +0100
+++ canna/debian/changelog      2009-05-07 07:26:16.279270052 +0200
@@ -1,3 +1,22 @@
+canna (3.7p3-6.2) UNRELEASED; urgency=low
+
+  * Debconf templates and debian/control reviewed by the debian-l10n-
+    english team as part of the Smith review project. Closes: #523990
+  * [Debconf translation updates]
+    - Galician. Closes: #524763
+    - Japanese. Closes: #524782
+    - Swedish. Closes: #524788
+    - Italian. Closes: #525164
+    - Finnish. Closes: #526186
+    - Portuguese. Closes: #526711
+    - Russian. Closes: #526756
+    - German. Closes: #526769
+    - French. Closes: #526871
+    - Basque. Closes: #526873
+    - Spanish. Closes: #526930
+
+ -- Christian Perrier <bubu...@debian.org>  Tue, 14 Apr 2009 17:55:30 +0200
+
 canna (3.7p3-6.1) unstable; urgency=low
 
   * Non-maintainer upload to fix pending l10n issues.

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