Dear Debian maintainer,

On Tuesday, March 24, 2009, I sent you a notification about the beginning of a 
review
action on debconf templates for glide.

Then, I sent you a bug report with rewritten templates and announcing
the beginning of the second phase of this action: call for translation
updates.

Translators have been working hard and here is now the result of their efforts.

Please consider using it EVEN if you committed files to your
development tree as long as they were reported.

The attached tarball contains:

- debian/changelog with the list of changes
- debian/control with rewrites of packages' descriptions
- debian/<templates> with all the rewritten templates file(s)
- debian/po/*.po with all PO files (existing ones and new ones)

As said, please use *at least* the PO files as provided here,
preferrably over those sent by translators in their bug reports. All
of them have been checked and reformatted. In some cases, formatting
errors have been corrected.

The patch.rfr file contains a patch for the templates and control
file(s) alone.

Please note that this patch applies to the templates and control
file(s) of your package as of Tuesday, March 24, 2009. If your package was 
updated
in the meantime, I may have updated my reference copy....but I also
may have missed that. This is indeed why I suggested you do not
modified such files while the review process was running,
remember..:-)

It is now safe to upload a new package version with these changes.

Please notify me of your intents with regards to this. 

There is of course no hurry to update your package but feel free to
contact me in case you would need sponsoring or any other action to
fix this.



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--- glide.old/debian/libglide2.templates        2009-02-14 12:18:12.951869029 
+0100
+++ glide/debian/libglide2.templates    2009-04-16 18:57:52.224384212 +0200
@@ -1,43 +1,49 @@
+# These templates have been reviewed by the debian-l10n-english
+# team
+#
+# If modifications/additions/rewording are needed, please ask
+# [email protected] for advice.
+#
+# Even minor modifications require translation updates and such
+# changes should be coordinated with translators and reviewers.
+
 Template: libglide2/no_card
 Type: boolean
 Default: false
-_Description: No 3Dfx card supported by glide2 found! Manually select driver?
- ERROR: No 3Dfx card supported by glide2 found!
- .
- This package is for cards based on the following 3Dfx chipsets: Voodoo 2,
+_Description: Manually select driver for 3Dfx card?
+ No 3Dfx card that is supported by glide2 was found. This package
+ supports cards based on the following 3Dfx chipsets: Voodoo 2,
  Voodoo Banshee, and Voodoo 3.
  .
- If you do not have a card based on one of the listed chipsets, and you are
- not compiling programs against glide, you should not have this package
- installed.
+ If the graphics card in this computer does not use one of these
+ chipsets, and you are not compiling programs against glide,
+ this package will not be useful.
+ .
+ If the graphics card is based on one of these chipsets, you
+ should file a bug report against this package, including the output from the
+ "lspci -vm" command.
  .
- If you do have a card based on one of the listed chipsets please file a
- bug on this package, including the output from the command 'lspci -vm' in
- the bug report.
- .
- Would you like to manually select the driver to use for now? (If not, a
- default sane value for compiling against will be selected.)
+ Please choose whether you want to manually select the driver to use for now.
 
 Template: libglide2/driver
 Type: select
 Choices: cvg, h3
 Default: ${default}
-_Description: Please select a driver.
- Please select the driver you would like to use.
- .
-  cvg  - Voodoo 2.
-  h3   - Voodoo Banshee and Voodoo 3.
+_Description: Driver for 3D acceleration:
+ Please select the driver you would like to use for 3D acceleration:
+  * cvg: Voodoo 2;
+  * h3 : Voodoo Banshee and Voodoo 3.
 
 Template: libglide2/card
 Type: select
 Choices: ${choices}
-_Description: Please select a card.
- We have detected more then one video card based on the following 3Dfx
- chipsets: Voodoo 2, Voodoo Banshee, and Voodoo 3.
+_Description: Card to use for 3D acceleration:
+ Multiple 3Dfx-based cards were detected based on one of the
+ following 3Dfx chipsets: Voodoo 2, Voodoo Banshee, and Voodoo 3.
  .
  Please select the card you would like to use for 3D acceleration.
 
 Template: libglide2/error
 Type: note
-_Description: ${e1}
+Description: ${e1}
  ${e2}
--- glide.old/debian/libglide3.templates        2009-02-14 12:18:12.955870218 
+0100
+++ glide/debian/libglide3.templates    2009-04-16 18:57:57.664383261 +0200
@@ -1,43 +1,49 @@
+# These templates have been reviewed by the debian-l10n-english
+# team
+#
+# If modifications/additions/rewording are needed, please ask
+# [email protected] for advice.
+#
+# Even minor modifications require translation updates and such
+# changes should be coordinated with translators and reviewers.
+
 Template: libglide3/no_card
 Type: boolean
 Default: false
-_Description: No 3Dfx card supported by glide3 found! Manually select driver?
- ERROR: No 3Dfx card supported by glide3 found!
- .
- This package is for cards based on the following 3Dfx chipsets: Voodoo
+_Description: Manually select driver for 3Dfx card?
+ No 3Dfx card that is supported by glide3 was found. This package
+ supports cards based on the following 3Dfx chipsets: Voodoo
  Banshee, Voodoo 3, Voodoo 4, and Voodoo 5.
  .
- If you do not have a card based on one of the listed chipsets, and you are
- not compiling programs against glide, you should not have this package
- installed.
+ If the graphics card in this computer does not use one of these
+ chipsets, and you are not compiling programs against glide,
+ this package will not be useful.
+ .
+ If the graphics card is based on one of these chipsets, you
+ should file a bug report against this package, including the output from the
+ "lspci -vm" command.
  .
- If you do have a card based on one of the listed chipsets please file a
- bug on this package, including the output from the command 'lspci -vm' in
- the bug report.
- .
- Would you like to manually select the driver to use for now? (If not, a
- default sane value for compiling against will be selected.)
+ Please choose whether you want to manually select the driver to use for now.
 
 Template: libglide3/driver
 Type: select
 Choices: h3, h5
 Default: ${default}
-_Description: Please select a driver.
- Please select the driver you would like to use.
- .
-  h3   - Voodoo Banshee and Voodoo 3.
-  h5   - Voodoo 4 and Voodoo 5.
+_Description: Driver for 3D acceleration:
+ Please select the driver you would like to use for 3D acceleration:
+  * h3: Voodoo Banshee and Voodoo 3;
+  * h5: Voodoo 4 and Voodoo 5.
 
 Template: libglide3/card
 Type: select
 Choices: ${choices}
-_Description: Please select a card.
- We have detected more then one video card based on the following 3Dfx
- chipsets: Voodoo 2, Voodoo Banshee, Voodoo 3, Voodoo 4, and Voodoo 5.
+_Description: Card to use for 3D acceleration:
+ Multiple 3Dfx-based cards were detected based on one of the
+ following 3Dfx chipsets: Voodoo 2, Voodoo Banshee, Voodoo 3, Voodoo 4, and 
Voodoo 5.
  .
  Please select the card you would like to use for 3D acceleration.
 
 Template: libglide3/error
 Type: note
-_Description: ${e1}
+Description: ${e1}
  ${e2}
--- glide.old/debian/control    2009-02-14 12:18:12.951869029 +0100
+++ glide/debian/control        2009-04-12 08:48:43.008029829 +0200
@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@
 Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}
 Suggests: device3dfx-module, device3dfx-source
 Description: graphics library for 3Dfx Voodoo based cards - support programs
- This is a support package which should be installed if you have a
+ This is a support package which should be installed if you use a
  card based on 3dfx Interactive, Inc's Voodoo chipsets.
 
 Package: libglide2
@@ -29,15 +29,13 @@
 Description: graphics library for 3Dfx Voodoo based cards - shared libraries
  This package allows you to use the 3D functions of cards based on
  3dfx Interactive, Inc's Voodoo 2 chipsets. You should install it if
- you have such a card.
+ you use such a card.
  .
- Note, this is NOT the package you want for Voodoo Banshee, Voodoo 3,
- Voodoo 4, or Voodoo 5.
- .
- Also note that for the moment the original Voodoo Graphics chipset
+ This package is not useful with Voodoo Banshee, Voodoo 3,
+ Voodoo 4, or Voodoo 5 cards, and the original Voodoo Graphics chipset
  is no longer supported.
  .
- NOTE: You'll need the /dev/3dfx kernel driver to use this library.
+ You'll need the 3dfx kernel driver to use this library.
 
 Package: libglide2-dev
 Section: libdevel
@@ -46,9 +44,8 @@
 Provides: libglide-dev
 Conflicts: llibglide-dev
 Description: graphics library for 3Dfx Voodoo based cards - development files
- This package contains the necessary header files, example programs,
- and documentation necessary to develop software for cards based on
- 3dfx Interactive, Inc's Voodoo chipsets.
+ This package contains the header files, example programs, and
+ documentation necessary to develop software using libglide2.
 
 Package: libglide3
 Section: libs
@@ -60,10 +57,10 @@
 Description: graphics library for 3Dfx Voodoo based cards - shared libraries
  This package allows you to use the 3D functions of cards based on
  3dfx Interactive, Inc's Voodoo Banshee, Voodoo 3, Voodoo 4, and
- Voodoo 5, chipsets.
- You should install it if you have such a card.
+ Voodoo 5 chipsets.
+ You should install it if you use such a card.
  .
- NB: This package does NOT need device3dfx, as it is using DRI instead.
+ This package does not need 3dfx, as it uses DRI instead.
 
 Package: libglide3-dev
 Section: libdevel
@@ -73,7 +70,5 @@
 Replaces: libglide2-dev, libglide3-alpha-dev
 Conflicts: libglide3-alpha-dev
 Description: graphics library for 3Dfx Voodoo based cards - development files
- This package contains the necessary header files, example programs,
- and documentation necessary to develop software for cards based on
- 3dfx Interactive, Inc's Voodoo chipsets.
-
+ This package contains the header files, example programs, and
+ documentation necessary to develop software using libglide3.
--- glide.old/debian/changelog  2009-02-14 12:18:12.951869029 +0100
+++ glide/debian/changelog      2009-05-09 08:59:51.799681321 +0200
@@ -1,3 +1,19 @@
+glide (2002.04.10-19) UNRELEASED; urgency=low
+
+  * Debconf templates and debian/control reviewed by the debian-l10n-
+    english team as part of the Smith review project. Closes: #524384
+  * [Debconf translation updates]
+    - Japanese. Closes: #525098
+    - Italian. Closes: #526377
+    - Russian. Closes: #526755
+    - French. Closes: #527212
+    - Portuguese. Closes: #527324
+    - Galician. Closes: #527325
+    - Czech. Closes: #527376
+    - German. Closes: #527487
+
+ -- Christian Perrier <[email protected]>  Fri, 17 Apr 2009 07:16:35 +0200
+
 glide (2002.04.10-18) unstable; urgency=low
 
   * Pass LD_LIBRARY_PATH directly to dh_shlibdeps, because it forces the -l

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