Dear Debian maintainer,

On Saturday, April 25, 2009, I sent you a notification about the beginning of a 
review
action on debconf templates for sdic.

Then, I sent you a bug report with rewritten templates and announcing
the beginning of the second phase of this action: call for translation
updates.

Translators have been working hard and here is now the result of their efforts.

Please consider using it EVEN if you committed files to your
development tree as long as they were reported.

The attached tarball contains:

- debian/changelog with the list of changes
- debian/control with rewrites of packages' descriptions
- debian/<templates> with all the rewritten templates file(s)
- debian/po/*.po with all PO files (existing ones and new ones)

As said, please use *at least* the PO files as provided here,
preferrably over those sent by translators in their bug reports. All
of them have been checked and reformatted. In some cases, formatting
errors have been corrected.

The patch.rfr file contains a patch for the templates and control
file(s) alone.

Please note that this patch applies to the templates and control
file(s) of your package as of Saturday, April 25, 2009. If your package was 
updated
in the meantime, I may have updated my reference copy....but I also
may have missed that. This is indeed why I suggested you do not
modified such files while the review process was running,
remember..:-)

It is now safe to upload a new package version with these changes.

Please notify me of your intents with regards to this. 

There is of course no hurry to update your package but feel free to
contact me in case you would need sponsoring or any other action to
fix this.



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--- sdic.old/debian/sdic-edict.templates        2009-04-20 15:36:50.038701562 
+0200
+++ sdic/debian/sdic-edict.templates    2009-05-13 07:21:21.351381878 +0200
@@ -1,25 +1,38 @@
+# These templates have been reviewed by the debian-l10n-english
+# team
+#
+# If modifications/additions/rewording are needed, please ask
+# [email protected] for advice.
+#
+# Even minor modifications require translation updates and such
+# changes should be coordinated with translators and reviewers.
+
 Template: sdic-edict/make_en
 Type: boolean
 Default: false
 _Description: Use the edict version of the English-Japanese dictionary?
- It is recommended decline this option and use the sdic-gene95 version of
- the English-Japanese dictionary.
+ Choosing this option is not recommended. The use of the sdic-gene95 version of
+ the Japanese-English dictionary is encouraged.
  .
- However, if you don't want to install this package and still want to use
+ However, if you don't want to install that package and still want to use
  such a dictionary, you can select this option and use the edict version.
 
 Template: sdic-edict/en_array
 Type: boolean
 Default: true
 _Description: Generate an index for the English-Japanese dictionary?
- If you have installed the sufary package, you can have an array index for
- the English-Japanese dictionary. This will greatly improve the word
- searching speed. The index size is about 10 Mb.
+ If you have installed the sufary package, you can have an index for
+ the English-Japanese dictionary.
+ .
+ This will greatly improve the word
+ searching speed. The index size is about ten MB.
 
 Template: sdic-edict/jp_array
 Type: boolean
 Default: true
 _Description: Generate an index for the Japanese-English dictionary?
- If you have installed the sufary package, you can have an array index for
- the Japanese-English dictionary. This will greatly improve the word
- searching speed. The index size is about 10 Mb.
+ If you have installed the sufary package, you can have an index for
+ the Japanese-English dictionary.
+ .
+ This will greatly improve the word
+ searching speed. The index size is about ten MB.
--- sdic.old/debian/sdic-eijiro.templates       2009-04-20 15:36:50.118684419 
+0200
+++ sdic/debian/sdic-eijiro.templates   2009-05-13 07:21:23.399382472 +0200
@@ -1,8 +1,18 @@
+# These templates have been reviewed by the debian-l10n-english
+# team
+#
+# If modifications/additions/rewording are needed, please ask
+# [email protected] for advice.
+#
+# Even minor modifications require translation updates and such
+# changes should be coordinated with translators and reviewers.
+
 Template: sdic-eijiro/tmpdir
 Type: string
 Default: /media/cdrom/eijiro
 _Description: EIJIRO media/file location:
- Please enter the directory containing the EIJIRO dictionary files.
+ Please specify the directory containing the EIJIRO dictionary files.
  .
- If you mounted EIJIRO CD-ROM at /media/cdrom, keep default.
+ The default setting is appropriate if the EIJIRO CD-ROM is mounted on
+ /media/cdrom.
 
--- sdic.old/debian/sdic-gene95.templates       2009-04-20 15:36:50.153273806 
+0200
+++ sdic/debian/sdic-gene95.templates   2009-05-13 07:21:25.491382428 +0200
@@ -1,32 +1,45 @@
+# These templates have been reviewed by the debian-l10n-english
+# team
+#
+# If modifications/additions/rewording are needed, please ask
+# [email protected] for advice.
+#
+# Even minor modifications require translation updates and such
+# changes should be coordinated with translators and reviewers.
+
 Template: sdic-gene95/tmpdir
 Type: string
 Default: /tmp
-_Description: gene95 archive file location:
- Please enter the directory containing the gene95 archive file (which must
- be owned by root). 
+_Description: Directory for the GENE95 archive file:
+ Please specify the directory containing the GENE95 archive file. This
+ directory must be owned by root.
 
 Template: sdic-gene95/make_jp
 Type: boolean
 Default: false
-_Description: Use the gene95 version of the Japanese-English dictionary?
- It is recommended decline this option and use the sdic-edict version of
- the Japanese-English dictionary.
+_Description: Use the GENE95 version of the Japanese-English dictionary?
+ Choosing this option is not recommended. The use of the sdic-edict version of
+ the Japanese-English dictionary is encouraged.
  .
- However, if you don't want to install this package and still want to use
- such a dictionary, you can select this option and use the gene95 version.
+ However, if you don't want to install that package and still want to use
+ such a dictionary, you can select this option and use the GENE95 version.
 
 Template: sdic-gene95/en_array
 Type: boolean
 Default: true
 _Description: Generate an index for the English-Japanese dictionary?
- If you have installed the sufary package, you can have an array index for
- the English-Japanese dictionary. This will greatly improve the word
- searching speed. The index size is about 10 Mb.
+ If you have installed the sufary package, you can have an index for
+ the English-Japanese dictionary.
+ .
+ This will greatly improve the word
+ searching speed. The index size is about ten MB.
 
 Template: sdic-gene95/jp_array
 Type: boolean
 Default: true
 _Description: Generate an index for the Japanese-English dictionary?
- If you have installed the sufary package, you can have an array index for
- the Japanese-English dictionary. This will greatly improve the word
- searching speed. The index size is about 10 Mb.
+ If you have installed the sufary package, you can have an index for
+ the Japanese-English dictionary.
+ .
+ This will greatly improve the word
+ searching speed. The index size is about ten MB.
--- sdic.old/debian/control     2009-04-20 15:36:50.038701562 +0200
+++ sdic/debian/control 2009-05-10 12:08:45.243683845 +0200
@@ -9,8 +9,8 @@
 Architecture: all
 Depends: ${misc:Depends}, emacs | emacsen
 Suggests: sdic-gene95, sdic-edict, sdic-eijiro, bsdmainutils
-Description: Emacs-Lisp program to view dictionaries
- Sdic is an emacs interface to English-Japanese dictionaries
+Description: Emacs interface for Japanese dictionaries
+ This package provides an Emacs-Lisp viewer for English-Japanese
  and Japanese-English dictionaries.
 
 Package: sdic-gene95
@@ -18,44 +18,42 @@
 Depends: ${misc:Depends}, ${perl:Depends}, wget, nkf, netcat-traditional | 
netcat
 Recommends: sdic, sufary
 Suggests: bzip2, kakasi
-Description: Installer for GENE95 dictionaries for sdic
+Description: installer for GENE95 dictionaries for sdic
  This package installs the GENE95 English-Japanese
- dictionary to use with sdic.
+ dictionary for use with sdic.
  .
  Although this package can install a Japanese-English
- dictionary derived the GENE95 English-Japanese dictionary,
- I would prefer to use the Japanese-English dictionary
+ dictionary derived from the GENE95 English-Japanese dictionary,
+ it is recommended to use the Japanese-English dictionary
  installed through sdic-edict.
  .
- Before installing this package, you have to get gene95.lzh
- or gene95.tar.gz or gene95.tar.bz2.  You can get these
- files from <URL:http://namazu.org/~tsuchiya/sdic/>
+ Before installing this package, you need a copy of gene95.lzh,
+ gene95.tar.gz, or gene95.tar.bz2, available from:
+  http://namazu.org/~tsuchiya/sdic/index.html
 
 Package: sdic-edict
 Architecture: all
 Depends: ${misc:Depends}, ${perl:Depends}, edict
 Recommends: sdic, sufary
-Description: EDICT dictionaries for sdic (installer)
+Description: installer for EDICT dictionaries for sdic
  This package installs the EDICT Japanese-English
- dictionaries to use with sdic.
+ dictionaries for use with sdic.
  .
- Although this package can install a English-Japanese
- dictionary derived the EDICT Japanese-English dictionary,
- I would prefer to use the English-Japanese dictionary
+ Although this package can install an English-Japanese
+ dictionary derived from the EDICT Japanese-English dictionary,
+ it is recommended to use the English-Japanese dictionary
  installed through sdic-gene95.
 
 Package: sdic-eijiro
 Architecture: all
 Depends: ${misc:Depends}, ${perl:Depends}, nkf
 Recommends: sdic, sufary
-Description: Installer for EIJIRO dictionaries for sdic
+Description: installer for EIJIRO dictionaries for sdic
  This package installs the EIJIRO Japanese-English and
- English-Japanese dictionaries to use with sdic.
+ English-Japanese dictionaries for use with sdic.
  .
- EIJIRO is available from EDP (lectronic Dictionary Project) and
- ALC Corporation. You can get the information about it from
- http://www.alc.co.jp/alcshop/eng/eijiro/
- .
- How to get EIJIRO dictionary data?
-  - Buy EIJIRO book (ISBN 4757408382)
-  - Download from http://www.eijiro.jp/ and buy the key
+ EIJIRO is available from the Electronic Dictionary Project, as
+ detailed (in Japanese) at http://shop.alc.co.jp/cnt/eijiro/. The
+ dictionary data can be obtained either by buying the book (ISBN
+ 4-7574-0838-2) or by downloading it from http://www.eijiro.jp/ and
+ buying a key.
--- sdic.old/debian/changelog   2009-04-20 15:36:50.086697058 +0200
+++ sdic/debian/changelog       2009-06-01 19:03:49.526998998 +0200
@@ -1,3 +1,20 @@
+sdic (2.1.3-18) UNRELEASED; urgency=low
+
+  * Debconf templates and debian/control reviewed by the debian-l10n-
+    english team as part of the Smith review project. Closes: #528474
+  * [Debconf translation updates]
+  * Galician. Closes: #529057
+  * Swedish. Closes: #529858
+  * Basque. Closes: #530617
+  * German. Closes: #530836
+  * Spanish. Closes: #530839
+  * Russian. Closes: #531125
+  * French. Closes: #531376
+  * Portuguese. Closes: #529678
+  * Czech. Closes: #530237
+
+ -- Christian Perrier <[email protected]>  Wed, 13 May 2009 10:16:35 +0200
+
 sdic (2.1.3-17) unstable; urgency=low
 
   * Change maintainer email address from [email protected]

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