Hi! On Mon, Jun 08, 2009 at 02:50:55PM +0200, Gerfried Fuchs wrote: > * Salvatore Bonaccorso <[email protected]> [2009-06-08 14:21:40 > CEST]: > > On Mon, Jun 08, 2009 at 01:22:56PM +0200, Gerfried Fuchs wrote: > > would you agree with this change from the description point of view? > > The sentence was copied from manpage, and following that there is an > > explicit example code how to use, but this all is in the manpage. > > I guess the first change is only removing the paragraph (like > suggested) and the second replacing the colon with a full stop, right? > Looks proper and better, even though I'm not totally convinced that the > last paragraph is really needed in there, but I'm fine either way. :)
Yes the second part is right. For the first I integrated the first paragraph into the second, to not let it have around alone as descriptive text but integrated into the "context". Best regards Salvatore
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