Package: initscripts
Version: 2.86.ds1-63
Severity: minor
Tags: patch

In the package description,

 -Description: Scripts for initializing and shutting down the system
 +Description: scripts for initializing and shutting down the system

DevRev6.2.2-compliance, in passing.  The other synopses in the same
control file are entitled to their capital letters.

   The scripts in this package initialize a standard Debian
 - GNU/Linux system at boot time and finalize it at halt or
 - reboot time.
 + system at boot time and shut it down at halt or reboot time.
 
Two issues:
 1) initscripts_2.86.ds1-63_kfreebsd-{amd64,i386}.deb
 2) "finalise" is some sort of malapropism (it means something
        closer to "put into its canonical form ready for use");
        "terminate" might be closer, but "shut down", as in the
        synopsis, is the normal idiom.
-- 
JBR
Ankh kak! (Ancient Egyptian blessing)
diff -ru sysvinit-2.86.ds1.pristine/debian/control sysvinit-2.86.ds1/debian/control
--- sysvinit-2.86.ds1.pristine/debian/control	2009-07-03 10:04:00.000000000 +0100
+++ sysvinit-2.86.ds1/debian/control	2009-07-03 10:06:19.000000000 +0100
@@ -54,8 +54,7 @@
 Recommends: psmisc
 Conflicts: sysv-rc (<< 2.86.ds1-1.2), sysvinit (<< 2.86.ds1-12), udev (<< 0.080-1), usplash (<< 0.5.8-2), libdevmapper1.02.1 (<< 2:1.02.24-1), insserv (<< 1.09.0-12)
 Replaces: sysvinit (<< 2.85-12), libc6, libc6.1, libc0.1, libc0.3
-Description: Scripts for initializing and shutting down the system
+Description: scripts for initializing and shutting down the system
  The scripts in this package initialize a standard Debian
- GNU/Linux system at boot time and finalize it at halt or
- reboot time.
+ system at boot time and shut it down at halt or reboot time.
 

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