Package: rocksndiamonds
Version: N/A
Severity: normal
Tags: patch

Dear Debian maintainer,

On Thursday, August 06, 2009, I notified you of the beginning of a review 
process
concerning debconf templates for rocksndiamonds.

The debian-l10n-english contributors have now reviewed these templates,
and the proposed changes are attached to this bug report.

Please review the suggested changes, and if you have any
objections, let me know in the next 3 days.

However, please try to avoid uploading rocksndiamonds with these changes
right now.

The second phase of this process will begin on Thursday, August 27, 2009, when 
I will
coordinate updates to translations of debconf templates.

The existing translators will be notified of the changes: they will
receive an updated PO file for their language.

Simultaneously, a general call for new translations will be sent to
the debian-i18n mailing list.

Both these calls for translations will request updates to be sent as
individual bug reports. That will probably trigger a lot of bug
reports against your package, but these should be easier to deal with.

The call for translation updates and new translations will run until
about Thursday, September 17, 2009. Please avoid uploading a package with fixed 
or changed
debconf templates and/or translation updates in the meantime. Of
course, other changes are safe.

Please note that this is an approximative delay, which depends on my
own availability to process this work and is influenced by the fact
that I simultaneously work on many packages.

Around Friday, September 18, 2009, I will contact you again and will send a 
final patch
summarizing all the updates (changes to debconf templates,
updates to debconf translations and new debconf translations).

Again, thanks for your attention and cooperation.


-- System Information:
Debian Release: squeeze/sid
  APT prefers unstable
  APT policy: (500, 'unstable')
Architecture: i386 (i686)

Kernel: Linux 2.6.30-1-686 (SMP w/1 CPU core)
Locale: LANG=C, LC_CTYPE=C (charmap=ANSI_X3.4-1968)
Shell: /bin/sh linked to /bin/dash
--- rocksndiamonds.old/debian/templates 2009-08-02 19:27:50.405579403 +0200
+++ rocksndiamonds/debian/templates     2009-08-24 06:36:49.291433955 +0200
@@ -1,11 +1,19 @@
+# These templates have been reviewed by the debian-l10n-english
+# team
+#
+# If modifications/additions/rewording are needed, please ask
+# [email protected] for advice.
+#
+# Even minor modifications require translation updates and such
+# changes should be coordinated with translators and reviewers.
+
 Template: rocksndiamonds/begin
 Type: boolean
 Default: true
 _Description: Download non-free game data?
- These games require data files that are not available under a free
- software license and so are not distributable with Debian. This
- script may automatically download these data files from the net and install
- them on your system.
+ The data files required by rocksndiamonds do not have licenses that
+ would allow them to be distributed as a package. However, they can
+ be automatically downloaded from the Internet and installed locally.
 
 Template: rocksndiamonds/select_games
 Type: multiselect
@@ -15,15 +23,14 @@
 Template: rocksndiamonds/util_notfound
 Type: error
 _Description: Missing utilities for download or unpacking
- The wget, 7-zip, unzip, tar are needed to either download or
- unpack the game data.
+ Downloading and unpacking the game data requires the packages
+ wget, p7zip, and unzip, but not all of these are available.
  .
- Some of them are not available on this system.
  You should install them and then reconfigure this package by
- using 'dpkg-reconfigure rocksndiamonds'.
+ using "dpkg-reconfigure rocksndiamonds".
 
 Template: rocksndiamonds/error_download
 Type: error
 _Description: Cannot download required resources
- When script tried to download one of choosen resources downloading
- error occured. Please check Your network connection or retry later on.
+ An error occurred while downloading game data. You should check
+ the network connection and settings and retry later on.
--- rocksndiamonds.old/debian/control   2009-08-02 19:27:50.405579403 +0200
+++ rocksndiamonds/debian/control       2009-08-10 18:13:40.335695397 +0200
@@ -18,13 +18,9 @@
 Conflicts: rocksndiamonds-data, rocksndiamonds-zelda, rocks-n-diamonds
 Architecture: any
 Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends},
- perl-modules, p7zip, wget, unzip 
-Description: Arcade style game
- Arcade game for Unix, Mac OS X, Windows and DOS in the tradition of:
-  * "Boulder Dash" (C 64)
-  * "Emerald Mine" (Amiga)
-  * "Supaplex" (Amiga/PC)
-  * "Sokoban" (PC)
-  * "Legend Of Zelda"
-  etc
-
+ perl-modules, p7zip, wget, unzip
+Description: arcade-style game
+ This package provides the game engine for Rocks'n'Diamonds, an arcade
+ game in the tradition of "Boulder Dash", "Emerald Mine", "Supaplex",
+ "Sokoban", "Legend Of Zelda", etcetera. Game levels emulating all of
+ these can be downloaded from ArtSoft.org.

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