Package: ace-of-penguins
Version: 1.2-9
Severity: minor
Tags: patch
The package description fails to mention canfield and thornq:
> Package: ace-of-penguins
> Description: Solitaire-games with penguin-look
> The Ace of Penguins is a set of Unix/X solitaire games based on the
> ones available for Windows(tm) but with a number of enhancements.
> .
> The package consists of the games Pegged, Minesweeper, Solitaire,
> Taipei (together with a level editor), Golf, Mastermind, Merlin and
> Freecell.
This description has some other slightly odd features - what's a
penguin-look? Why bother mentioning that it works on Unix/X? Why
say "(tm)" for a brand name that's actually an (R)? And what sort
of order is that list in? So while I'm rewriting it I'd suggest:
Description: penguin-themed solitaire games
The Ace of Penguins is a set of solitaire games inspired by the ones
available for MS Windows, but with a number of enhancements.
.
The package consists of the games Canfield, Freecell, Golf, Mastermind,
Merlin, Minesweeper, Pegged, Solitaire, Taipei (with a level editor),
and Thornq.
-- System Information:
Debian Release: squeeze/sid
APT prefers testing
APT policy: (500, 'testing'), (50, 'unstable')
Architecture: i386 (i686)
Kernel: Linux 2.6.30.custom
Locale: LANG=en_GB.UTF-8, LC_CTYPE=en_GB.UTF-8 (charmap=UTF-8)
Shell: /bin/sh linked to /bin/dash
Versions of packages ace-of-penguins depends on:
ii libc6 2.9-25 GNU C Library: Shared libraries
ii libpng12-0 1.2.39-1 PNG library - runtime
ii libx11-6 2:1.2.2-1 X11 client-side library
ii zlib1g 1:1.2.3.3.dfsg-15 compression library - runtime
ace-of-penguins recommends no packages.
ace-of-penguins suggests no packages.
-- no debconf information
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JBR
Ankh kak! (Ancient Egyptian blessing)
diff -ru ace-of-penguins-1.2.pristine/debian/control ace-of-penguins-1.2/debian/control
--- ace-of-penguins-1.2.pristine/debian/control 2009-10-05 23:21:45.000000000 +0100
+++ ace-of-penguins-1.2/debian/control 2009-10-05 23:23:40.000000000 +0100
@@ -11,10 +11,10 @@
Package: ace-of-penguins
Architecture: any
Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}
-Description: graphical solitaire-games with penguin-look
- The Ace of Penguins is a set of graphical solitaire games based on the
- ones available for Windows(tm) but with a number of enhancements.
+Description: penguin-themed solitaire games
+ The Ace of Penguins is a set of solitaire games inspired by the ones
+ available for MS Windows, but with a number of enhancements.
.
- The package consists of the games Pegged, Minesweeper, Solitaire,
- Taipei (together with a level editor), Golf, Mastermind, Merlin and
- Freecell.
+ The package consists of the games Canfield, Freecell, Golf, Mastermind,
+ Merlin, Minesweeper, Pegged, Solitaire, Taipei (with a level editor),
+ and Thornq.
