Package: jed Severity: minor The first line of the package description does not read smoothly. How about changing:
Jed is a small, fast (faster startup than bash) and powerful text editor. to Jed is a small, fast and powerful text editor, yet starts faster than bash. ? (Note: the current version conflates two different sorts of speed: speed of startup, and speed of operation. Jed is fast in both senses.) In the "Editing functions" and "Tools" paragraphs, use comma not semi-colon to separate the elements of the lists. Add a paragraph break before "Modes for markup languages", or remove the line break. Some small things: "Gnome" -> "GNOME"; "Openoffice" -> "OpenOffice"; "incremenntal searches" -> "incremental search"; "SH" -> "sh"; "NROFF" -> "nroff". -- System Information: Debian Release: 5.0.4 APT prefers stable APT policy: (500, 'stable') Architecture: i386 (i686) Kernel: Linux 2.6.26-2-686 (SMP w/1 CPU core) Locale: LANG=en_GB.UTF-8, LC_CTYPE=en_GB.UTF-8 (charmap=UTF-8) Shell: /bin/sh linked to /bin/bash Versions of packages jed depends on: pn jed-common <none> (no description available) ii libc6 2.7-18lenny2 GNU C Library: Shared libraries ii libgpm2 1.20.4-3.1 General Purpose Mouse - shared lib ii libslang2 2.1.3-3 The S-Lang programming library - r jed recommends no packages. Versions of packages jed suggests: pn gpm <none> (no description available) -- To UNSUBSCRIBE, email to [email protected] with a subject of "unsubscribe". Trouble? Contact [email protected]
