On Thu, 2010-12-30 at 21:02 +0100, Julien Cristau wrote: > On Thu, Dec 30, 2010 at 19:33:33 +0000, Adam D. Barratt wrote: > > > Hmmm, that wording could suggest (or at least suggested to me on my > > first reading of it) that the firmware will only be automatically loaded > > on installation. > > > > Maybe "If such firmware packages supporting hardware in the system are > > installed, the firmware will be loaded automatically when required." ? > > (although I'm not 100% happy with that wording either, tbh, I was mainly > > trying to avoid saying "packages supporting installed hardware are > > installed") > > > Maybe "If such firmware packages are installed, the firmware will be > loaded automatically when required."? If there's no relevant hw in the > system, the "when required" part won't apply anyway.
True. The "firmware" in "firmware packages" is also slightly redundant, but meh. Your text, with or without that slight tweak, works for me; thanks. Regards, Adam -- To UNSUBSCRIBE, email to [email protected] with a subject of "unsubscribe". Trouble? Contact [email protected]
